Twilight woke up in the same bed that she started with. But this time she wasn't alone. She saw Princess Celestia standing on the balcony looking outside. The fear and worry Twilight had a while ago vanished instead it was replaced by joy. She tried to untangle her way out of the sheets to get to her teacher but failed. she ended up falling out of bed with a thump. Celestia turned around and levitated the sheets of of Twilight's head.
"Thank you." Twilight said happy to not be tangled by the evil blanket anymore. She stood up and gave her teacher a warm smile.
"You're welcome. I'm happy to see that you're awake." Celestia said. "Did you enjoy your nap?"
"Yes. But I still don't know what's going on. Where are we? Why are we here? Who were those ponies? Why does Spike look older?" Twilight asked.
"Calm down Twilight. I know you have a lot of questions but you need to relax." Celestia said slightly giggling seeing how that part of Twilight didn't change a bit. "Even if I told you what happened I don't think you're old enough to understand."
"Yes I can! I'm a big pony!" Twilight said yelling stomping her hooves.
"Don't you raise your voice young filly. I promise I will tell you, when I understand better the situation." Celestia said in a stern voice.
Twilight backed down and nodded her head seeing that it would be best to not push it anymore.
"I'm just confused. I didn't mean to yell." Twilight said in a soft voice.
Celestia pulled Twilight into a hug and wrapped her under her wings.
"I know you are. But everything is ok. You don't have to worry." Celestia said even though she wasn't sure it was ok herself.
"Ok." Twilight said as she pulled away and smiled.
Suddenly the room doors opened and five ponies and a dragon came in.
"We've looked everywhere Princess. We have no idea what spell she used." Applejack said.
"Well we better keep looking. We're going to need the spell if we ever want to turn her back." Celestia said.
"But how are we ever going to find that book? We don't know where she left it and she's not going to remember. " Fluttershy said.
"Is it this book?" Twilight's little voice asked.
Everyone turned around and looked at Twilight who had a book in her hooves.
"Where did you find that?" Asked Rainbow.
"It was sticking out from under the bed." Twilight said.
Celestia took the book and started flipping through the pages to try and find the spell Twilight used. It took her a while but she finally found it. However what she read made her worry.
"What does it say Princess?" Asked Rarity.
"Is Twilight going to turn back into older Twilight?" Asked Pinkie.
"It says that the only pony that can undo the spell is the pony who performed the spell in the first place." Celestia said. "Meaning that only Twilight can undo the spell."
"WHAT!!" Everyone yelled.
"Does that mean that Twilight is going to stay like that?!" Rainbow asked.
"Can't you try to undo the spell anyway?" Asked Rarity.
"I guess I can try." Celestia said.
Everyone looked at Twilight making her feel uncomfortable.
"Why are all of you looking at me like that?" asked Twilight.
"Hold still." Celestia said before she started performing the spell.
Twilight's eyes widened when she felt herself being pick up from the ground and started getting wrapped around by a magical aura. Celestia tried to focus her magic as much as she could but lost control and dropped Twilight.
"oww, that hurt." Twilight said getting up. "What was that going to do anyway. What's going on."
"Sorry Twilight. I'll explain later." Celestia said.
"So what do we do know?" Pinkie asked.
"We have to try and find another way to fix this." Celestia said.
"Can I help?" asked Twilight.
"I don't think so Sugercube. Maybe you should go and play while we try and fix this problem." Applejack said.
"What problem?! And wont anypony tell me?! What is so important?!" Twilight asked very angry.
"Twilight Sparkle. What have I told you about raising your voice to older ponies? It is non of your concern for now. When you need to know I will tell you. But for now run along and go play. " Celestia said putting Twilight outside the door and closing it.
Twilight pouted and crossed her hooves.
"I don't get it. What is so important that nopony can tell me? I'm old enough to understand. It's just not fair." Twilight said as she stood up and walked around.
She didn't know what to do so she decided to just to walk around the castle and explore the castle. She was looking around but stopped when she saw the big kitchen. She walked in and suddenly got a devious smile on her face.
"If they want me to have fun, I'll have fun." Twilight said.
She got pounds of flower, eggs, milk, water, and a whole lot of other crazy stuff. When she was done she put all the stuff in a bag and looked around the castle for more stuff.
"Now all I need is ropes, balloons, and buckets. " Twilight said to herself.
She ran around the castle looking for everything she needed and when she was done she gathered all her stuff together.
"This is going to be the best prank ever ! ! " Twilight said all exited. "They're never going to see this coming."
Prankster Twiley? no way. THe little bookworm, a prankster? Can't be.
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oh but it is. watch out equestria here comes Twily
Oh Dear God Not Prankster Twilight.
oh boy that can't be good and love the story hope to read more soon
I think, it has been awhile since I've read a Filly Twi Story, but nonetheless, I'm liking it so far... But I have to ask (I mean no offense ) If you already have a proof-reader, I know, first time writing is hard, but getting a proof-reader really helps, and also, people here is very helpful, Again I mean no offense, your story is going great and I'm waiting for more (I already follow it).
Also, I love Prankster Twi!!! , Is the perfect combination, between books and Itching powder!!!, please tell me that there's going to be more Prankster Twi...
Celestia you troll. Tell her what's going on.
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She is trollestia after. What would one expect?
I can't wait to see the next chapter! Common!
Updates?
It's a good story, but you really need to fix those errors that others have pointed out. Filly Twi is adorable as all Tartarus, though.
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sorry about that, just fixed it.
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good news! Next chapter is coming tomorrow about midday.
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I will.
5056073 YAY but I won't be able to see it till Monday. I have no WiFi at home so I use my schools.
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well that's too bad. my parents took internet off for a week one time, I cracked and became insane to try and go anywhere that had internet. I swear i turned to pinkaminia for a second. I'm not proud of it.
Great story so far I can't wait till you "upload" the next chapter. Also maybe you could try making the chapters a bit longer maybe try describing the pony's feelings or the environment they are in to make the reader more "attuned" to where they are and what's happening. Just a thought that might make this make story even better than it is.
P.S. If you ever need a pre reader/ somepony-to-bounce-ideas-off pm me, I can be very creative at times.
5060632 Hey I would be proud of being pinkamena. But you lied its not up. I was looking forward to it all weekend.
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I'll keep that in mind. And I've actually been looking for a prereader.
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I'm sowwy I feel so ashamed. my computer broke. So....it's not really my fault. blame technology.
There was some more errors here, but I skipped the most of them.
Something that's important though is this:
SHOW, NOT TELL
and try to use comma ( , ) instead of dot ( . ) at the end of a sentence in a dialogue. That will make it easier to read, and look less "clumsy".
Another tip is when a character has several lines in a row, put the "said X" after the first sentence. For example:
-Hello Johnny! said Eric. How are you doing?
-I'm fine thank you, what about you?
-Everything's well, but......
Also you can see that I only used one "said X", but it's still easy to see who says what. That is because I specified "Johnny" and "Eric" in the first sentence. Now everyone knows who's talking. (This can be much harder to pull off when there's more than 2 characters though...)
oh boy Twilight is going to be in a whole heck of trouble