How long has she worked at the office, watching over and managing every little thing, from the smallest of celebrations to the largest of annual events in Ponyville, while still keeping up with her own duties?
Very nice, looking forward to see this fic develop as it continues. You're descriptive writing and inner monologue both stand out to me as exceptionally good! Keep up the great work.
I like the cover as is actually, you've added the ponies to the background very well, the shadows are nice touches.
Very nice, looking forward to see this fic develop as it continues.
You're descriptive writing and inner monologue both stand out to me as exceptionally good! Keep up the great work.
It was a nice look into Cheerilee's life, but how will the human tien into it? In the first chapter, it was explained how he was tied to Mayor Mare.
It was nice I imagine so far those chapter are for introduce characters I imagine