Very descriptive and pretty interesting, got my attention enough to fav and like. Strangely it seems a little too descriptive, but that just might be my personal preferences talking Anyways, I would be happy to pre-read, I don't know how much I could help but I do know how to tell if something starts to drag on and tell you if anything seems to become redundant or too wordy. I won't be much help with grammatical problems though, that be for editors to work out
Very well done. The writing style doesn't personally fit what I like to read, BUT it is incredibly well done. Thumbs up and keep the good work coming.
Best of luck with the story.
Very descriptive and pretty interesting, got my attention enough to fav and like. Strangely it seems a little too descriptive, but that just might be my personal preferences talking Anyways, I would be happy to pre-read, I don't know how much I could help but I do know how to tell if something starts to drag on and tell you if anything seems to become redundant or too wordy. I won't be much help with grammatical problems though, that be for editors to work out