After defeating Tirek, Twilight notes that she's better at using alicorn magic than the other princesses. She decides it's best for the Kingdom if she names herself queen and keeps the power for herself. Bondage, violence, and eventually vo
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Quite the life, now I can't wait to see how Rarity gets what she deserves for disobeying our goddess Twilight....
please please... just go fuck your self
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As much as I love my goddess Twilight, her methods of punishment for her friends-turned-enemies are, how shall I say it, too harsh. Why couldn't she keep the other Elements as her own harem of slaves? Keep the collars, magic inhibitors for the unicorns, and wingstraps for the pegasi on them; and they won't dare disobey. How will they attempt to defeat her if their minds are broken?
I call upon an old saying. "Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer."
You know:
I think your a really good writer, and the action in your story is perfect. I have to comment though about the Futa / hermaphrodite... If it is your thing, its your thing, but making EVERYONE have BOTH sexes, comes across to me as a complete cop out...it makes things too easy and contrived. You could really expand this story if you got rid of that.
Anyways thank you for the effort and the story. If you ever want to discuss ideas..I like to do that.
danmit , a good mix of things going on here but i just don't want any gore or piecing of any kind in anything really , so im at an impasse......
I wonder if pinkie will go pinkameana on twilight. That would be cool.
5154408 Why a tall cliff with sharp rocks? Wouldn't that be relatively painless? You should have said for me to jump off a medium cliff in the middle of nowhere with dull rocks at the bottom where I would break my legs and bleed out over several days.
5154416 Yes, I do so frequently.
5156763 Oh I'm always open to ideas.
5156910 This is a mind control story?
Waiting with baited breath for 2.3! Wonder who's on the Bucking block next :)
5165280 Why are you reading this if you aren't enjoying i?
5170070 *psst* Whisper: Quiet do you want her to hear us and get us into trouble...
Outloud: Quiet you fool, Twilight is the true goddess, not the weak slaves like the other three
5170107 Whsper: Good good.....
5162918 No it's a paid commission, so I only have to please one person to succeed, and They didn't want me to waste the chapters they paid for with filler. Also it's a clop fic; I don't know if you're aware, but clop fics are generally made to jack off to, not win any awards.
5165280 I'm getting a feeling that you may have some dislike for Twilight here.
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Do me a solid and read Princess Luna's Suicide Solutions. Based on what you just said, it's perfect for you.
5177756 Just do it.
Last paragraph is missing its beginning
What the hecc did moon quill do?
Oh, AJ, you silly hick cooz. Everypony loves to see a good Cunt Punt!