Its like a 12 year olds fangasm dream. Seriously, I used to write this kind of stuff back in the day. The violence, the "personalized invitation to hell," the squad names, everything. Its got that quaint feel, and is written well for its apparent age. Ill keep reading, why not?
Sick chapter m8.
nice chap i just wish the fun didn't have to end so quickly
You sir are a tease!!!! You make good chapters way too short!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wait, wait, wait! Why am I confused all of sudden?
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Maybe because you were remembering the older version of the story.
5335018 maybe it's because this is a bunch of Homo Sapiens saving the hides of a bunch of Homo Erectus
huh...
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5335211 Oh...
WHERE'S MAH UPDATE?!
*Loads Lightrifle*
Its like a 12 year olds fangasm dream. Seriously, I used to write this kind of stuff back in the day. The violence, the "personalized invitation to hell," the squad names, everything. Its got that quaint feel, and is written well for its apparent age. Ill keep reading, why not?
Pretty good, just wish the chapters were longer
So...update anytime soon?
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Master chief: come here little pony
5334541 Do U even read m8?
6633617 is that h8 m8? Or just some b8?