Sins are never left forgotten. For the Royal Sister, one haunts them every day and leaves them wondering if something could have been done. Well they will find out their sin is not forgotten. It is alive, changed and angry. It is their lover.
Sin was not oblivious to her statement. He knew damn well what she meant and took it as a scary revelation. "You can't be serious. . ." "I'm very serious," she pointed at the Element of Honesty. "She is his wife and to be the mother of his foal." "We found out last month, before the blizzard came." Fluttershy whispered.
Just pointing out a flaw, applejack is honesty, fluttershy is kindness.
Loving the story so much! Definately better than the former version, which was still really good. Just a small fix for you on the chapter title. You have it as VIIII, the correct roman numeral for 9 is IX. Just giving you a heads up. Can't wait for the next chapter!
"Oh, so Tia does remember my language. Well sorry sweetheart, I'm not in the mood of fucking a traitorous, hormonal bitch like you!" -comeback of the century
"Because you love me," she reminded him, although it was not the best thing to say. "And you cannot stand losing to me in an argument. No matter how meaningless the conversation is, you have poor impulse that drives you to argue until you win."
Sin chuckled in a dark voice and grew a sinister smile. "Oh ho ho ho, we're going to talk about our problems, are we?" he asked in a serious tone, his eyes flaring with every ounce of his rage towards the past. "Well it's my turn, and I think I'll remind you of your inability to get facts before making stupid decisions. After all, it was you who banished me BEFORE GETTING THE FACTS!"
"I was twenty-two years old. I was young and ignorant."
"But you were old enough to have me sent away."
"I cried for months after finding out you were innocent. I did everything I could to have you brought back to me."
"Well you failed, my love," he chastised, mocking the upset mare to the point of tears. "Because look at me. I'm a mentally and physically tarnished man who had more horse dick forced in his ass and mouth than the average prostitute. My body is ravaged with years of torture and horror. And I have two gods sealed inside me." He gave her a thumbs up. "Yeah, great job in having me retrieved. Your searching skills are not to be questioned."
"Fuck you!"
"Oh, so Tia does remember my language. Well sorry sweetheart, I'm not in the mood of fucking a traitorous, hormonal bitch like you!"
"Send me a bill. I'll pay for all of the damages." Sin demanded, though in a very disrespectful tone.
Celestia and Luna laughed, suddenly amused and relaxing. The tension eased completely from their bodies and they sank down in a patch of dead grass while the group bathed them in confused looks.
"What the hell is so funny?" Sin asked harshly. "Do I have something in my teeth or my hair?"
"No, we're just happy to see that you're still so energetic." Luna answered, and then turned to her purple friend. "And 'mister' is the wrong term, Princess Twilight."
"Prince Firestorm is the more accurate term," Celestia clarified, specifically to her distraught human who was giving her a suspicious look. She and Luna shared mischievous looks as he furrowed his brow. "What," she giggled. "Did you really expect Starswirl to sit back and watch Solaris burn your adoption papers. You are still royalty because of him."
Luna giggled in her hoof. "He was so desperate to repay his debt to you for saving his laboratory that he forged another set of documents for father to burn."
As angry as Sin was at his Tia and Lulu, he could not help expressing some shock for the deceased unicorn.
...😐 That was very weird... to go from talking about being raped for god knows how many years, by god knows how many (horse dicks) and the irreparable mentally, emotionally and physical damages from such inhumane actions and the ex wife/lover of such victim response is "Fuck you" Then brushing it off Like what he said wasn't important to react about/talk about or even feel any sympathy, remorse or dread from learning such knowledge, for said victim because... he's a boy? It happened a long time ago? They...don't...care?😕 Either one of these reasons is beyond fucked up man, Dude I don't know if you are aware but rape is not a easy thing to...ignore, especially if you're writing about it happening to your main protagonist, I feel very confused. If it were me, I probably set out to destroy pony kind, and do to the princesses or their loved ones what was done to me, and if you tell me one of the reasons why he hasn't, isn't something very reasonable and believable, you need to take a big step back and rethink this story. Good luck fellow writer and may you hands never tire and your inspiration never die.
Just pointing out a flaw, applejack is honesty, fluttershy is kindness.
6964024 Well I feel stupid.
But the mistake is fixed. Sorry about that.
Loving the story so much! Definately better than the former version, which was still really good. Just a small fix for you on the chapter title. You have it as VIIII, the correct roman numeral for 9 is IX. Just giving you a heads up. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Wait a minute! that chapter title is worng, the number 9 correct form is IX other than that is good
It's IX not VIIII
Just pointing that out
Didn't the conversation that took place just now reveal that he is everything but innocent?
7231285 I imagine it's somewhat like statute of limitations. His crimes happened a millennia ago. Can't prosecute it.
"Oh, so Tia does remember my language. Well sorry sweetheart, I'm not in the mood of fucking a traitorous, hormonal bitch like you!" -comeback of the century
6964776 oh fuck his eye scared me when scrolled down
...😐
That was very weird... to go from talking about being raped for god knows how many years, by god knows how many (horse dicks) and the irreparable mentally, emotionally and physical damages from such inhumane actions and the ex wife/lover of such victim response is
"Fuck you"
Then brushing it off
Like what he said wasn't important to react about/talk about or even feel any sympathy, remorse or dread from learning such knowledge, for said victim because... he's a boy?
It happened a long time ago? They...don't...care?😕
Either one of these reasons is beyond fucked up man,
Dude I don't know if you are aware but rape is not a easy thing to...ignore, especially if you're writing about it happening to your main protagonist, I feel very confused.
If it were me, I probably set out to destroy pony kind, and do to the princesses or their loved ones what was done to me, and if you tell me one of the reasons why he hasn't, isn't something very reasonable and believable, you need to take a big step back and rethink this story.
Good luck fellow writer and may you hands never tire and your inspiration never die.