All i wanted was a normal birthday... well as normal as a wartime birthday can get. But, alas i didn't get one. It started off normal first getting Pip-Boy at a Vault-tec building...then, all hell breaks loose. A firefight erupts along with the
Considering he numerous grammatical, spelling, missing words, and or misuse of words.. I pretty much had to slog through this, it's a good premise, I like it, I like the story, but may I suggest that you get a good pre-reader/editor to help out?
4669003 Le calendar says....I'll have to finish up editing about 18k words worth of another story, but I could have that done in a few hours, if I stopped being distracted by stuff, like making corn muffins.
4669037 Pringles? Hah! My cousin is making her chili, which won first place thrice in the Georgia state chili contest. She also hit me for typing that, and she just walked away. *maniacal laugh* Hungry now?
4669082 Most likely i'm going to have some nice smoked ribs that just fall off the bone smothered in sweet bbq sauce with some fried pickles. Now, that is how you do it in arkansas Boom
Dude, you really need an editor.
4645678 Yeah, i know. I'm still trying to find one. If you know one just send me a link. It would really be appreciated
4645967 Ok...i forgot about that
4645884 If you can't find one within the next week, I'll do it
4649830 Alright, thank you very much. Finding an editor is like trying to find a truthful politician in DC. One in a thousand.
4665486
I did indeed. When I was a kid and video games had only 3-letter high score names, I'd use '
PPC' for mine.
4666078 Heh, I used MRK, DVN, KRT, LAO or SNR whenever I got bored of putting NOV.
4667021
4667138 Problem?
4667145 justa little one. Your coversation is just lighting my board
4667166 Good...
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4667497 hmm, intresting...
Considering he numerous grammatical, spelling, missing words, and or misuse of words.. I pretty much had to slog through this, it's a good premise, I like it, I like the story, but may I suggest that you get a good pre-reader/editor to help out?
4668552 I'm trying to look for one if you know one that would awesome
4668818 I certainly know one. *holds up mirror* Hey, handsome, how ya doin'?
4668983 Ok... Sorry just made me laugh
4668983 But, you are willing to help?
4668991 Succuss! That's how the McDonald's spelled 'success' when my niece got a job there.
4668996 Perhaps...perhaps. Lemme check my calendar.
4668997 That's nice You think they need a lesson on spelling?
4669003 Le calendar says....I'll have to finish up editing about 18k words worth of another story, but I could have that done in a few hours, if I stopped being distracted by stuff, like making corn muffins.
4669031 Ok, now you are just making me hungry Well... good thing i got princles
4669037 Pringles? Hah! My cousin is making her chili, which won first place thrice in the Georgia state chili contest. She also hit me for typing that, and she just walked away. *maniacal laugh* Hungry now?
4669082 Hmm, challenge acceptedts1.mm.bing.net/th?&id=HN.607994071694377310&w=300&h=300&c=0&pid=1.9&rs=0&p=0
4669082 Most likely i'm going to have some nice smoked ribs that just fall off the bone smothered in sweet bbq sauce with some fried pickles. Now, that is how you do it in arkansas Boom
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4669097 I'm in Utah. We have Mormons. Some of them can actually cook, believe it or not.
4669107 I'm in arkansas we have 'the dukes of hazard'
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4669113 "The Dukes of Hazzard." Correction, your Honor!
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4669121 Much better, Headshot Lunar-sama.
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