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I suppose Marx thought that's how it would go at first as well.
Communism sure does sound nice on paper doesn't it?
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In this instance it's kind of necessary.
The consequences of Twilight getting involved with Rainbow Dash, more importantly, getting caught in the Khanate in a relationship with Rainbow Dash would be an immediate cessation of any kind of treaty or truce negotiations, which would leave war as the only logical option remaining. Needless to say Celestia is anxious to avoid that and so her desire to avoid that war takes precedence over the feelings and/or private life of her student.
Thanks for giving me a chance to work on this. I had fun coming up with this little aside to your much larger story.
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Eeyup. I tried to hint at that by making most of the refutations into roundabout deflections and accusations against detractors to show that the Communists aren't really any better in order to milk the propaganda angle. It's all true from a certain point of view if you don't think too hard about what the Communists actually are like.
6373719 The Federation is based on the US, with some differences.
... my god it's been red October for a thousand years? how have they been able to keep that kind of shit up for that long. the only bright side is that none of those psychos have won.
well despite them having the ice cream shop that sells all the flavors of tyranny it looks like no ones buying.
6381621 It hasn't always been like that.
After the fall of the Tsars, the Valorossiyan empire fractured back along tribal lines, as it had been organized before the Tsars unified the tribes, and various empires and blocs have risen and fallen over the course of that long and fluid civil war.
wait if twi can needs to marry someone she do not love
what about celestia ??????????????????????????????????????????????????
and cadence she married a guard not a noble ???????????????????????????????????
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Celestia has reasons for doing everything that she does, and there's a reason why she doesn't marry. There's also something about Shining Armour that I'll get into later. Certainly it would be unwise to assume that she approves of everything that her junior princesses do.
6711783 huumm it also sounds a bit like celestia is gunning for twi love herself
6711848 I won't confirm or deny that :wink:
6712184 wona want's to know *jumps on the lord inquisitor and sits on head* yay go ahead my loyal minion to the next chapter
6713044 It's going to get more interesting as things go on. We're reaching the end of the boring-setting things up phase. My ducks are coming into a row, and soon it'll be time to start shooting them down... with a minigun.
6721364 have no fear, they'll be working for their dinner soon enough. I can promise that.
7272677 Would you mind me asking why you felt that way? Just because that's not my intent.
7272724 Well, this whole story started by focusing on Twilight, Rainbow Dash, the cat-people-who's-name-I-can't-remember and on Luna to a smaller extent. However, it may just be me though, some of the more recent chapters have been more focused on the wider world. Which is fine, the chapters are still very well written, but it means that there's less of a focus on the characters in the story we really care about. Having us learn about the wider world is fine, but the key is to maintain the story's focus on the characters while you do so.
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I see, thank you for your feedback.
The reason why I'm doing it this way is to show the reader the wider world, and to show him things that the characters wouldn't know. I'm also showing the wider impact the character's actions have on the world and how things are building in various different areas. In war and in politics, events start to take on their own momentum, and some of the signs of that are hidden from the characters until the train is well and truly off the rails. I'm trying to show the reader the signs that the train is starting to lose control.
7272743 I also felt that when chapters nine and ten were combined, they were too long for easy reading, hope that chapter ten sheds some light on the situation and brings things back into the proper focus.
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"the train is starting to lose control"
CHOOCHOO MUTHAFUKKA!
7282243 It appears as though I've missed a number of chapters that have been posted. What the hell?
7321607 All the bad guys, really?
Given we've only seen one major league bad guy and one minor bad guy reach for the rape stick, I'd say that's a bit of a stretch. Also Springbok is a terrorist, and the rapey stuff fits into the ideals of the attack, which is supposed to be as shocking and revolting to EQ public opinion as possible, it's not rapey because he's a bad guy, it's rapey because that's part of the point of the attack. Although Springbok also uses rape because he's a bad guy.
For guys like the Shah and Aznan and so on, rape is beneath them as a means of expressing power and dominance. They have no need to use such base methods. Springbok meanwhile is a more elemental force, and force is a major tool in his arsenal. Hence the rapey stuff.
7283749 How're you finding the new chapters, if I may ask?
7345227 I like them.
With the hindsight of the modern era, I can't help but laugh and scoff at this chapter.