God dangit now I want some bacon

Y u cancel

Interesting chapter.

Why does this story have so many down votes? This is rather entertaining. This is the first Human/pony fic I've read and it's pretty decent. I don't like humans and ponies meeting but this is actually rather cool. Please, I hope to see more of this!

This is a great story I look forward to reading your next chapters. I am sorry you have writer's block right now. I hope you get over it. I look forward to how this story will unfold and if Elizebeth will eventually bite Sarah with permission of course when Elizebeth starts needing it to sustain herself and that Sarah allows it to save her. From what I read in other fanfics it will be a very intimate thing for the both of them and it will most deffinately strengthen their friendship bond

well... I have some unfortunate news. my stepfather, Moe, is quite the ass and I had an order of protection put in place (restraining order) and I have court on the 18th. I should be moving in with my grandparents soon as well. so... I will try to put out chapters as much as possible. love you all

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So, I found the infamous comment that brought down Peppy.

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I have this comment saved for lolz now.

My oc is a changeling and i would would brather be in love with a bat pony than eney other race

Well everyone, I won the court case yesterday and today I'm moving to Ohio!

Yay

4618904 Interesting use of ひらがな, カタカナ, and カンジ.

Nice job cousin o' mine, you did a wonderful job.

5483284 thank you for the feed back... I've never really gotten a "true" critique, but mostly trolls and "nice work". Again, I thank you, and will make sure to revise the chapters when I can(Probably not until summer vacation) and when they're done, they should at least be longer... And if it's nothing too much to ask, maybe help give some ideas? I've just about run out and I only planned out six chapters ahead of time

I want bacon now

Why must I always find cancelled fics? I was really hoping to be able to read another chapter... then I noticed the fic was cancelled. I then facepalmed at ralizing that after I started reading. It's a great fic though in my opinion. And I understand having troubles with ideas. I'm in the same predicament. Honestly I'd like to find another fic like this now.

6301674 you know what? I think I'll continue it!

6313653 If you do I have something to look forward and one of like 300 fics I'll actually read an update for. I stopped adding stuff I would read and I instinctively added this to both favorites and tracking just hoping someday it may be resurrected. You would honestly make my day. I'm just wishing I could type more on my phone and I would...

6313653 PLEASE DO!!!!!

6337615 I find it ironic I see you here. I've read a couple of your fics and honestly expected I'd never see you here at least.

6313653 And Just like Vinyl-ScratchDJ17 said please do continue this. I really enjoyed what I read

6341525 what do you mean you never expected to see me here?

6341600 I was just never expecting to see you on this specific fic since there are so many on this site

I think the dialogue could use a bit of reworking, and the reactions could be tweeked. As well, There doesn't quite seem to be enough narration at times, but otherwise I'm loving the story. The idea's great, and even though the characters could use a bit more personality, I'm already loving Elizabeth. (Strange name, but then again, she was named back before even Luna was born, and what do I know about such prehistoric naming conventions?)

cool story man

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CAN YOU KEEP GOING PLZZZZ

BIG NEWS!!! I'M CONTINUING THIS STORY! For those of you that have been following this story, I have finally decided to revise and continue this fanfic. After Many years have passed I think it's about time to continue this

I'm currently working on Chapter 6 and will hopefully have it out within a week. Any ideas you guys have for the story? PM me and I might pick a few ideas to include in the next chapter

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Lucky for you, I'm continuing the story!