Star Wars: Revenge of the Harmony

by Thebronywithin

Chapter 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEXh8z3JpWs

Coruscant: Jedi Temple, three weeks before the end of the Clone Wars.

"Master Malek, we're pleased that you would join us." Mace Windu says to James.

"The pleasure is all mine masters, I take it you have an assignment for me?" James responds. “It’s unlike the council to call someone up to chat.”

"Indeed, we have intercepted a transmission that suggests the separatists may be launching an assault on a system identified as EQT88." Mace Windu confirms.

"EQT88? But that's a peaceful planet, I doubt the inhabitants even know about the war, given the planet is only identified by it’s basic code, the Separatists would not dare!" James says.

"Even so, They are.” Mace Windu continues. “I want you to take a battalion of clones to intercept them, and keep them from landing on the planet if possible."

"I will do my best master." James says, bowing before leaving the conference room.

"May the force be with you, James Malek" Windu says as James leaves.

After James leaves, Obi Wan speaks up.

"Are you sure he should be doing this assignment alone?" Obi Wan asks. " he did turn to the dark side once, I don't trust him."

"Turn to the dark side, he did, but back to the light he came, handle himself, Master Malek can" Yoda responds.

"I hope your right, for his sake, and ours." Obi Wan says.

--
As James makes his way to the Acclamator class cruiser, a younger Jedi with a few holes burned into his robes, which would only result from blaster fire, comes running up to him.

"Master!" The young Jedi exclaims.

"Jaden?” James turns around to see his apprentice. “how’ve you been? I thought you were on the Christophsis system!"

"Just got back a few moments ago. so, you off on another mission?" Jaden asks.

"Yes, apparently the Separatists thought it would be a good idea to invade a peaceful planet, it's my job to make sure they don't." James nod’s his head.

"Well then, good luck master.” Jaden pat’s James on the shoulder. “and try not to destroy too many of our own ships this time!"

"You will never let me live that down, will you?" James asks, raising an eyebrow at his apprentice.

"Nope!" Jaden responds.

"Well, goodbye my young Padawan, and may the force be with you." James says, boarding the acclamator star cruiser.

"May the force be with you, master." Jaden says back as the ship’s loading platform closes, and shortly thereafter, takes off.

--

"Status report" James says as he enters the bridge.

"We will be arriving at our destination in a few moments sir." The bridge commander says.

"Very good, and let's try to be quick about this, I don't want another run-in with an entire fleet of re-enforcements like last time!" James says, stifling a shudder at the memory.

"Yes sir" The commander says.

The pilot begins to speak. "Sir, we’ll be arriving in ten seconds."

James grabs the handrail of the stairs he just climbed down. “Get ready men, I’ve got a bad feeling about this.”

“Five seconds, four, three, two, one second, NOW!”

The ship exits hyperspace only to be met with a massive droid star cruiser, and a number of frigates as well, and their ship is immediately under fire.

"Launch all Arc-170's and V-Wings, get those droid ships out of commission!" The captain of the ship exclaims.

James see’s the battle quickly going sour, then grabs the intercom mic. “Blue Squadron, to your fighters.” James runs towards the bridge doors. “Hold the ship on one piece, I’ll be right back.” and with that, he runs out the door down to the hangar.

“This is where the fun begins.” The captain says as James leaves.

--
James runs into the hangar and quickly gets to his small Jedi starfighter, getting himself strapped in, and his comlink hooked up. “Alright, all or nothing.” James mutters as he activates his triangular ship and exits the hangar through the opening in the middle.

“This is Blue leader, all wings check in.” James calls through his comlink.

“Blue one, standing by.”

“Blue five, standing by.”

“Blue four, standing by.”

“Blue two, standing by.”

“Blue three, standing by.”

“Blue six, standing by.”

James smiles, knowing he’s got his full strike team assembled. “Alright team, attack pattern delta, let’s give ‘em hell.”

Blue squadron uniformly moves closer to one of the three Banking Clan Frigates. “Alright, let’s do this nice and easy, four and six, take out the engines, two, you’re on the auto turrets, one, three, five, with me, formation Q317.” James commands over his comlink.

The ships break their current formation as blue 4 and six go to the rear of the ship, blue two flies around the ship, taking out all possible auto turrets, and Blue one, three, and five surround James’s ship in a triangle using the wings of their ‘T’ shaped fighters.

“Alright, let’s go for the Shield generator, and the main reactor.” James commands again. “Four, Six, you got the engines down yet?”

“Almost there sir.” The voice of a clone trooper calls back to James.

“Very good, Five, Three, you go for the main reactor, One, with me.”

“Yes sir” all three voices call at once.

The protective formation splits as Blue Five and Three head to take out the main reactor.

“Blue One, formation beta X32, use a pulse missile first to disable the shield, then give it all you’ve got.” James looks over and nod’s to his companion in the other cockpit before they split apart, fly around, and head back towards the ship side by side. “We need to time it just right, too soon and we’ll hit the wrong part of the ship, too late, and we may hit one of our own.”

James and Blue 1 increase their speed as they fly towards their target. “Blue one, fire pulse missiles now!” James calls as he, and his companion, both fire their pulse missiles at the left “wing” of the frigate, and immediately the shield starts to recede. “we don’t have much time, fire everything!”

Then, a of voice come over the comlink. “Sir, the engines are destroyed.”

“Good, five, three, you have the main reactor destroyed yet?” James calls over the communication link.

“Just abou- MOVE! IT’S GONNA BLOW!” Blue three calls over the link.

James, and Blue’s one through six speed away from the frigate as it explodes, sending debris flying in many directions.

“Watch that flying debris boys.” James hollers, shortly before his ship is struck by a questionably fast moving piece of debris. “I’m hit, continue the mission, I’ll se what I can do from the planet’s surface.”

“Yes general, we understand.” Is the only response he gets.

As James burns through the atmosphere of the planet, he does his best to avoid any cities or towns, but not avoid them too much, he needs to get to civilization.

"there, a small town, CRAP, I'm heading straight for it!" James says as he pulls the ship a bit to the left, in an attempt to not hit the town.

"Brace for impact." James says to himself.
The ship screeches and grinds against the dirt ground, sending small pieces of debris flying as it skids along the ground, the ship finally stops about 20km from where it originally touched down, it was now at the edge of a forest, and no more than 20ft from a small cottage.

"glad I didn't hit that small cottage, I don't know what I would do if I did." James says, seeing how close to the building the ship is.

“Wow, that was a rough landing, I wonder if anything in here even still works.” James says, noticing the rough shape of his Jedi Starfighter. “R7, scan the area, check for droids.”

The little orange and blue astromech beeps a response and it’s scanning antenna pops out. Shortly thereafter, it beeps again, and text written in Galactic Basic appears on James’s control screen.
“Blast, they’re right on top of me, I’d better find that town I passed, if the Federation army invades, they’d probably start with an isolated area, then hit the capital city.” James hops out of his ship, but before he runs off, he takes a look at the state of his ship from the outside. “shit, guess I’m not going to be flying this again any time soon.”
He turns towards the town and walks towards it. “Stay with the ship R7.” the droid makes a combination of beeping noises.

as James makes his way towards the town, a Federation landing craft flies overtop of him and beats him to the town, landing in the middle of one of the roads, and begins unloading battle droids and one FAT Neimoidian.

James approaches the town, but ducks behind an apple cart to avoid being seen by the Droids.

“I need to time this just right, the separatists can be very persuasive. Well, until they start blasting, I need to wait until after a droid takes a shot before I attack.” James says, as he examines the situation.

“Excuse me, but why is there an army in my town?” the mayor says.

“Ah yes, your planet has the privilege of being guarded by the separatist army, you will be protected and safe as long as we are here, I congratulate you on your good fortune!” The separatist commander says.

“Ugh, as if.” James mutters quietly.

“Our planet was safe long before your arrival, and I assure you, we do not need any protection, our princess can handle that!” Twilight says, coming out from behind the Mayor.

“But with the galactic war, it can’t hurt to have another level of protection!” The commander says back.

“War? What war? The only hint of war I see is your stupid army!” Rainbow Dash says, clearly pissed off, likely because she was busy napping before the droids arrived.

“The war that has been raging on for the past four years, that is the war I’m talking about, now, battle droids, search the town, and see if they are harboring any Republic contraband or Jedi.” The commander says, pointing in the direction he wants the droids to go.

The droids search the town, invading homes, and flipping small carts, James almost has to move, but a droid finally takes a shot, James doesn't know what for, but it causes James to leap into action, doing a front flip over the apple cart he was hiding behind, turning both his lightsabers on as he does, the one in his right hand is a green lightsaber, the one in his left hand is blue.

“It’s a Jedi BLAST HIM!” one of the droids takes aim, and shortly, so do many others.

James blocks shots directed at him, and runs into the wave of droids head on, slicing a fair number of droids, but they quickly start to surround him.

The crowd that has gathered instantly becomes worried for his safety, they Mayor more so than the rest, in a panic, she does the one thing she can.

“Twilight, do something, help him, he’s in danger!” The mayor says to Twilight Sparkle.

Just as the mayor finishes talking to Twilight, James leaps into the air, all of his limbs collapsed so he’s in a tight ball, then, he outstretches his limbs very quickly, Blasting the droids away and destroying what was left of them.

He then notices that more landing craft are arriving, one has already landed, and one more is in the air. He uses the force to pick up the two of the droid ships that have landed, and slam them together, causing them to explode, Then he throws both his lightsabers at one of the ships still in the air, then leaps onto the hull, removing his sabers from the cockpit window, and then does a backflip off the ship, and throws his blue lightsaber at it’s left engine, causing it to crash down to the ground, creating yet another explosion, James turns to the commander, and points his green lightsaber at him.

“WAIT!!” Twilight calls out. "we should take him to the princess, she could get him to talk, confess what his army is up to!"

"It's not his army, he's just a commander of a small wave of droids!" James says back.

"Wait a minute? you mean that wasn't the whole army?" Rainbow dash says, clearly distraught from the news.

"Afraid not." James replies, he then taps on the communicator on his arm, now pointing his blue lightsaber at the Separatist comander, and signals his troopers in space."Captain Fox, do you read me?"

"yes sir." a voice cracks from his wrist communicator.

"I need you to sweep the planet, try to see if any other droids made it to the surface, I had a run in already." James orders, looking around for any other droids.

"Yes sir, Right away." Captain Fox replies and the comm goes dead.

"Now, why don't we take this separatist to this Princess you mentioned earlier." James says to Twilight, motioning towards the commander.

Author's Note:

Revised Chapter one, YAY!

more to come my friends.

Comments

[Deadite174]

What the fuck did I just read.

[Black Alicorn]

After reading this, I have to act. Read this version insted:

Coruscant, Jedi Temple, 3 weeks before the end of the Clone Wars.
Deep within the ancient temple, some of the greatest Jedi of their time had called a meeting regarding the next mission of yet another Jedi.

"Master Malek, we're pleased that you would join us." Mace Windu says to James.
"The pleasure is all mine masters, I take it you have an assignment for me?" James responds, giving Master Windu a respectful bow.
"Indeed. Clone Intelligence intercepted a transmission that suggests the Separatists may be launching an assault on EQT88, in an attempt to secure a much needed supply line for their forces elsewhere." Windu replies.
"EQT88? But that's a peaceful planet, I doubt the inhabitants even know about the war, they wouldn't dare!" James says.
"Even so, the Separatists have a habbit of turning neutral planets to their side. We cannot allow them to enslave yet another world. I want you to take a battalion of clones to intercept them, and keep them from landing on the planet."Windu replies, a tone of dissapointment in his voice.
"I will do my best master." James says, leaving the conference room.
"May the force be with you, James Malek" Windu wishes James as he leaves.
After making sure that he had left, Obi Wan spoke up, worried about how James would fare on this vital mission.
"Master Windu, are you certain he should carry out this assignment alone?" Obi Wan asks. " He turned to the dark side once, what's to stop him from doing it again? Personally I don't fully trust him."
"Turn to the dark side, he did, but back to the light he came, handle himself, Master Malek can." Yoda responds.
"I hope your right, for his sake, and ours." Obi Wan says.

--

"Master!" A younger boy ran up to him, his Jedi robes torn and a few burn marks around the holes that could have only been made by blaster fire. He was suprised and excited to see James.
"Jaden, I thought you were in the Christophsis system!" James says.
"I got back just a few minutes ago. So, you off on another mission?" Jaden asks.
"Yes, apparently the Separatists thought it would be a good idea to invade yet another peaceful planet, I must make sure they don't." James says, confidence raging through him.
"Well, good luck master, and try not to destroy too many of our own ships this time!" Jaden says, a teasing tone in his voice.
"You will never let me live that down, will you?" James asks.
"Nope!" Jaden responds, clearly mocking his master.
"Well, goodbye my young Padawan, I must be going, and may the force be with you." James says, leaving to board the waiting Acclamator class Assault ship the Republic had given him for his mission.
"May the force be with you too, master." Jaden says back as the massive ship prepares takes off.
--

"Status report." James says to the commanding officer on the bridge.

"We will be arriving at our destination in a few moments sir." The bridge commander reports to his superior.
"Very good, and let's try to be quick about this, I don't want another run-in with an entire Separatist fleet like last time!" James says.
"Yes sir" The commander says.
They both hoped that they would arrive first. The Acclamators were excellent ships, but they wouldn't last long in a full blown battle. They were alone, and without the support of a Venator class, they would be pretty vulnerable.
The pilot begins to speak. "Exiting hyperspace in five, four, three, two...one..."
The ship exits hyperspace only to be met with a massive droid star cruiser, which in response immediately opens fire on them. It's heavy cannons could rip through them easily.
"I want every single Arc-170 and V-Wing in the fight immediately, now scrap these clankers!!" The captain of the ship exclaims.
"Sir, our shields are almost gone, and our shield generator is heavily damaged!" One of the engineers aboard the ship says to the captain, he was obviously terrified.
"Call for reinforcements, we need immediate assistance!" James says to the Captain.
"You heard the General, call for backup!" The captain says to one of the clones in charge of communications. He immediately sends a distress call into the vast emptiness of space.
"Assistance is on it's way, but I don't think we can hold together much longer!" Reports the comms officer after a few minutes.
"We've taken heavy damage, she can't hold much longer!" the captain exclaimed.
Explosions shook the ship as the crimson bolts from the droid cannons ripped through the crippled Acclamator.
Onboard the droid bridge...
A green tactical droid sat in his chair. One of the regular battle droids nearby started to report the situation.
"We caught them by suprise sir, their shields are down and they can't take much more."
The tactical droid jumped out of his chair, and his synthesized voice rang with an evil tone, at least for droid standards.
"Finish them!"
Back abboard the Republic ship...
"Get to the escape pods, there's nothing more we can do!" James Shouted back.
"But sir, what about you?" One of the clone troopers asked.
"I'm going to try to use the force to keep the ship from hitting any cities, now GO, I'll handle this!" James responded.
"Yes General, right away!" A clone trooper responded.
James presses the intercom button.
"ALL HANDS ABANDON SHIP! I SAY AGAIN, ABANDON SHIP!!" James yells into the intercom, his voice blaring throughout the ship.
A few minutes later, James checks the display. All escape pods have been jettisoned, and several of the ships from the hanger have taken off.
An explosion from the rear of the ship shook the bridge.
"There goe the stabilizers, here we go!" James says, as the ship begins to plummet.
Alarms are blaring everywhere as the ship enters the atmosphere, James is now doing his best to angle the ship so that it will both land without being completely destroyed, and without landing on a city or town.
"There, a small town, CRAP, I'm heading straight for it!" James says as he pulls the ship a bit to the left, in an attempt to not hit the town.
"Brace for impact." James says to himself.
The ship screeches and grinds against the ground, spewing red hot debris all over the area. Those small pieces would fall all over the planet... The ship finally stops about 20km from where it originally touched down, now at the edge of a forest, and the very tip of the ship was no more than 20ft from a small cottage.
"Glad I didn't hit that... I don't know what I would do if I did." James says, seeing how close to the building the ship is.
"Now, I wonder if there is anything in the hangar bay that's still flyable?" James says. "Or at least a spreader bike, that landing was pretty rough."
He made his way to the hangar bay, snaking through the collapsed areas of the ship.
“Whoa, that was a rough landing, I wonder if anything in here even still works.” James says, noticing the extensive damage in the hangar bay.”AHA! One of the speeder’s seems undamaged, now, if I could just activate it, I could scout out the area, GOT IT! now, I just need to check this place out, then I can find out if the droids have landed yet.”
James zooms out of the hangar on his speeder bike out the area, and soon enough, he catches a droid lander unloading droids in preparation for attack.
“Gotta time it just right, the separatists can be very persuasive, until they start shooting, I need to wait until after a droid takes a shot before I attack.” James says to himself, as he examines the situation.
“Excuse me, but why is there an army in my town?” the mayor says.
"Your planet now has the privilege of being under the protection of the Separatist Alliance, you will now be protected and safe as long as we are here! I congratulate you, on your good fortune.” The separatist commander says smiling as he 'claims' the planet for his faction.
“Our planet was safe long before your arrival, and I assure you, we do not need any protection, our princess do that!” An enraged Twilight says, coming out from behind the Mayor.
“But with the galactic war, you can never be too safe!” The commander replies, hoping to not get into the trouble of coordinating a fight against local resistance.
"War? What war? The only hint of war I see is your stupid army!” Rainbow Dash says, obviously annoyed by the droid forces that had landed there.
“The war that has been raging on for the past four years, that is the war I’m talking about, now, battle droids, search this dung heap for any Republic personnel or contraband!" The commander barks, and with a quick point of his finger, sends waves of droids to ransack yet another peaceful town.
The droids respond immediately to orders, running to search the town. Within moments, they invade homes, and knock over various objects in the market. One finally takes a shot to open a door, causing James to leap into action, turning both his lightsabers on, the one in his right hand is a green lightsaber, the one in his left hand is blue.
"A Jedi!" A droid shouts, terrified at the mere sight of a Jedi.
"Don't just stand there you idiot, blast him!" Another droid replies, causing the rest of the squad to aim and fire,
James blocks shots directed at him, sending them right back to the droids who fired them, turning them into smoldering scrap piles. James advances immediately, blocking more shots and when he gets close enough he systematically begins slicing them. The droids were powerless to stop the onslaught form his lightsabers.
“Twilight, do something, help him, he’s in danger!” The mayor barks to Twilight Sparkle.
Just as the mayor finishes talking to Twilight, James let’s out a full on Force Repulse, blasting the droids away from him, effectively elliminating what was left of them. He then uses the force to pick up the droid ship, and slams it into the ground, causing it to explode into a raging inferno. The gentle hum of a starship engine reaches his ear. He throws his lightsabers to what turned out to be a small droid gunship, slicing it's wings off and sending it spirraling to the ground where it gave off a brilliant explosion.
He shifts his gaze to the fleeing droid commander, and with a flick of his hand, the commander lifts off the ground and comes towards him. He puts his hand to his side, sending the commander to the ground. He reactivates his lightsaber and almost would have killed the commander, were it not for Twilight's stern interruption.
“WAIT!! We should take him to the princess, she could get him to talk, tell us what his army is up to!"
"It's not his army, he was just commanding one of the first waves!" James says back.
"WHAT? you mean that wasn't the whole army?" Rainbow dash exclaims, shocked that there were more of those metal monsters.
"Afraid not." James replies, he tries to signal his troops, hoping that some were still alive.
"Commander Fox, you still there?"
"Yes sir." A voice cracks from his wrist communicator.
"Get down here immediately, some droids already made it down, so there are bound to be more."
"Yes sir, Right away." Commander Fox replies.
He turned to Twilight.
"Apologies ma'am, I believe introductions would be in order, but we have more pressing matters to attend to. For instance, getting this Separatist scum to this princess you mentioned..."

I shouldn't have taken the time to fix this up for you, Thebronywithin, but you are relatively new here, and I feel that I should help you. The original version was... but I still give you an A for effort. Now after you finish reading this I want you go out and read some good fics, and try to get an idea of how you should try to make future chapters.

(If this was meant to be a trollfic, I am going to fucking kill you...)

[Thebronywithin]

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Thank you for editing it, I know my versions aren't anywhere near perfect, but writing the whole thing on an iPad doesn't help that, but I hope to get new chapters up, better edited, and I will take points used in the edited version you posted in the comments, and if you have any suggestions for storyline or other points I could put into future chapters, feel free to say so!

And let me know if you want me to repost the original chapter with your edited version, I will credit you accordingly ofcorse.

[Thebronywithin]

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I said the same thing when I wrote it and read it to myself, but instead of read, it was write.

(in case you don't understand "WTF did I just write?" is what I said)

[thelazycommenter]

'Sup...

I was looking around the list of crossover stories, and when I looked at yours I saw that it had Starwars in it, along with you writing it, so I had to read it. And this is great! (when better edited)
Good luck with your writing!

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