Chapter one will be started Monday June 23

There's a few errors in your description which will potentially (probably) throw readers off. Might want to have a look at it and edit it thoroughly. I'm honestly interested in where you take this story however, and shall continue to keep an eye on it. Thanks for writing.

Challenge completed

4549187 okay I'll do that later, I just wanted to write everything in my head out before I lost it. Thanks for the tip

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Cherma

Some times i want to cut loose on the profane insults but it cherma is actually chimera.

You have caught my attention you may continue.

Interesting...

Certainly very unique, yet weird, has everything I like! Halo! MLP! And being turned into MC! But I almost quit when I heard Anthro...

Sorry but I'm gonna just nag a little. Hey, I'm a die-hard Halo fan.
First - A little bit too fast paced, But original!
Second - The whole turning into Master Chief is weird but come on! He lets himself get spotted and surrenders?! Chief would never do that!
And Third - Maybe it would be easier to write MA5B ( Or whatever varient it may be e.g MA5C or F. ) instead of Assault Rifle.
Anyway, I'll follow and if you have any questions about Halo, ask me.

I agree with Swift, but there is just one thing I will nag about most. It's that there were sentence mistakes everywhere.
I will follow this but I expect better later on.
I for one would love too take the opportunity to ask if you would like my assistance in story correction.

4573577 I will accept the assistance if you want to give it note i'm not the best at grammar but I try.

4559699 for the second question, this is not MC it is a dude with MC's body and abilities, also he wants to go back to Earth as himself Discord was a leader so he may have an Idea of how "Desperate times equal Desperate measures"

4554057 Thanks I'll fix that in the future.

4557451 I just wanted to give the human in anthro Equestria a shot so I did.

4559699 Also I am a huge halo fan as well hell I read most of the books.

4576383 That's fine, you do the punctuation and I'll work on the grammar as best I can.
And thank you for the acceptance of my offer.

4577018 I can send you the G doc link if you give an email to share with.

4577027 Don't worry about the guys comment on Anthros, I have a brother who really likes it and I don't see anything wrong with it, just do what makes you happy to write.

4577048 I did this due to sudden want and anthro's were just an experiment that I'll play with in this, but the dragons, and discord will not be anthro due to the fact that I would not see to much of a diffrence between anthro them and non-anthro

(you have access to the folder.)

4549187 This story came out of the blue when I read another and decided I wanted to do a LOHA... story and a halo story and this was born like most of my work it will be a "plan for major things but other then that wing it while checking for plot holes, and other inconsistencies and don't force myself into a corner.

Also I don't even know what my characters will do until they do it in a way I'm with you guys on the ride.

Chapters finished just needs to go through editing

The fact he obeyed despite the appearance of primitive weaponry leads me to believe he's a weak fuck.

And your an asshole for liking that weak Protagonist bullshit.

Go fuck yourself.

kewl story im always looking fo storys that include statues and humans and stuff so this is great.

4550351 Three years after being told that your summary is on life support and needs TLC...
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It's one paragraph broseph.

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sigh I did say that didn't I wow forgetting about things like that and life getting in the way of writing at times I will actually get on that now.

5747992

No, this Chief is not weak. He didn’t see the need for getting into a lethal fight with the native people who were attempting to determine if he was friend or foe. Besides, he didn’t want to expend his limited resources; he only has a few clips of ammunition, on a fight that could be avoided by cooperation with the native people. Also, adding vulgar profanity to each sentence is unnecessary to get your message to the writer.

5747992
Lol you seem kinda pressed that your simple mind doesn’t process logical actions and the personality of a character from a game that most definitely wouldn’t go in guns blazing in a new world with limited supplies.

What I thought this story was gonna become: https://youtu.be/ZO1nnsx8krs

What this story seems to be: https://youtu.be/6PHpCywCcIA