Honestly, I just came for the Roxy Music... but I have to say, you are a wordsmith. As an introvert myself, it was mind blowing to see how you bring Cinnamon's character to life.
...I tended to view compliments as assaults, recoiling at them as if they only served as warning shots for the insults about to come...
This. So much, this. It's like looking in a mirror. I generally only post on the last chapter of a completed fic, but that line, if nothing else, merited comment.
FIRST!!!
great start by the way
midnight?!!?
homg, i read that story
i get the reference
YAY ME!
almost every fanfic i've read with derpy in it depicts her as beautiful. Well, you gotta admit...she is kinda cute
Good description but severely hampered by typo's and the overwhelming feel of author insert given off by the main character.
This looks good, going to read rest of chapters as soon my nap is over har har.
Honestly, I just came for the Roxy Music... but I have to say, you are a wordsmith. As an introvert myself, it was mind blowing to see how you bring Cinnamon's character to life.
This. So much, this. It's like looking in a mirror.
I generally only post on the last chapter of a completed fic, but that line, if nothing else, merited comment.