i wonder if the bad guy is going to win one of these types of storys hmmmmm

If the fastest character in the setting cannot even touch her then what's the point of any of this? Just have her snap her fingers and rape everyone at once, it's not like we should expect it won't end that way.

There's a point at which there's no investment, even the minimal amount involved in fetish-material.

4582664 Ugh... here goes:
#1: I think you have made a mistake here, Rainbow Dash is not light, nor Sonic. Sure, she may be the fastest/best flyer in Equestria, but they were on the ground! Honestly, I think AJ had better chances than her in that situation.
#2 Yeah, giving a reason for Celestia to the bed by making the villain a potential threat might be a mistake. It's not like the show introduced such bad guys where the Main 6 had to find new power to beat.... no wait, they kinda did. There has to be a reason for her to do what she is going to do in the next chapter.

I appreciate the critique, but your assumptions were off. Sure, I could have coped out by saying in this AU Rainbow was slower, but I think the explanation up there is a better one.

4582664 Just having her "snap her fingers" would be fine if you were looking for straight up sex, but corruption material is about the gradual changes, both to individuals and the setting as a whole. And believe me, finding the latter is magnitudes harder than finding the former. Beyond that, even if it is within Mistress Butterfly's power to instantly make everyone her slave (and this may or may not be the case), she strikes me as the type who would rather put in the effort to see her victims fight her and fail, than take the easy route. If you need an analogy, it's likely the same reason Discord didn't do everyone what he eventually had to do to Fluttershy.

@Bass Canon: One bit does strike me as odd.

I could have taken them all, but seeing as I do intend to have some fun, I will give you a chance. You have ten seconds to summon Twilight, Applejack and Pinkie Pie, or the magic in this letter will do it for me!

Now, I imagine Celestia's a fast reader, but assuming this magic started counting down when she opened the letter (as opposed to when she saw that sentence), she'd have to read it, process it, then do the location and teleportation all within those ten seconds. Doable for Celestia, I'm sure, but if it's Mistress Butterfly's intent for Celestia to summon the remaining three, the timeframe seems just tight enough to be risky. The alternative explanation I can think of for this is if Mistress Butterfly didn't actually imbue said magic into the letter, and the short timeframe is meant to make Celestia panic and not check the letter for said magic (in other words, a bluff). With her power, though, I can't see a reason for Mistress Butterfly to do that.

4583494 Oh that? Well, I went for the "Mission Impossible" thing, so it should probably say "once you finish this letter." A small oversight, but once Twilight comes back to Ponyville, you will see what MB meant. You know, at first I was not aiming at a "Power Ponies" angle, but that is what this story is becoming, and fast!

To me, this is even scarier than Cupcakes.

4583777 Is that a bad thing or a good thing? I can never tell if people want to be scared or not.

4583787 Dont take it as a bad thing. Its good as in "Ill read this but not in the dark feeling".

4583805 If Mistress Butterfly is scary to you, I did my job. If there is no respect for the villain, why even bother having a hero?

I made a group! Yes, it's quite the accomplishment, I know. So, if you enjoy ponies in (or made of, or made into) latex, come and join "Latex Ponies"!
LATEX PONIES

I like the way this is laid out. If you were going around corrupting people/ponies, you don't want it over quickly, that would be boring, so making it fun and different and even a bit of a challenge is more how it should be done. It's so hard to find decent fan fics that do that, so this is like a diamond amongst insta-rape fics, so keep it up

Well said brother...or sister4583808

4583852 Thank You for the words of encouragement. I am sure you will enjoy the next part. Working title: "Perception of Light".

4583888 Hehe, well Bass is a mare, that is for sure.

4583975 And Linkman is a man

4584275 Well the author is a male, but the OC is a mare. Yeah, go figure.

4584278

still liking it so far, cant wait to see more f/f mind control goodness!!

Interesting story When is the next chapter gonna be released? I must know what happens next

4590765 Finals are merciless, but I can say that the raw story is not done yet, the draft is.

btw if transformations r gonna be a part of this, and omfg do i love transformations, can i suggest a lamia (la-mare-ia?) for somepony? theres absolutely nothing in the world sexier then snake women/snake mares

well... this turned out to be different from what I thought it would be^^ Am I right to assume that "Mistress Butterfly" is the same being that turned Luna into Nightmare?

4620595 In a way, yes. Her origins are revealed in the next chapter, and I hope you will find the cause a bit more fresh than the usual. But as for Nightmare Moon, you can consider her the residue of MB's earlier "work" on the princesses.

4676962 huh, I see^^ interesting^^

Oh I'm loving this so far (its criminally rare to find a good femdom or dominatrix fic here.)

Anyway I did notice you haven't uploaded a new chapter in a while I hope that don't mean you've abandoned it. Be a shame if you have I'm loving where this is going.

In any case I did need to ask why Mistress Butterfly keeps taking away there pony aspects you'd think she'd want to retain Fluttershy's ability to fly.

4708922 Don't worry, I am just taking my time with the next chapter. Fluttershy was always insecure in her own ability, and the fact she becomes as far away from her own being while in Butterfly mode reinforces that. Also, she can just teleport wherever her influence is felt, so no need to fly.

i cant wait for more

4728492 Patience, I hope it will be worth it.

Mmm, rereading this story during the wait for the next chapter never gets any less arousing. I eagerly await the update of this (and all your other stories, for that matter) with a burning fire. Can't wait to see some of the other transformations to come!

I love your work, Bass. Keep it up.

4732446 CMP's latest chapter is almost done, so you can look forward to that.

if you are planing on defeating Mistress Butterfly perhaps you could branch the story.... one branch where she is defeated and one where she wins and is victorious!?!?

4904831 That was the idea from the start.

4908636 AWESOMENESS
I salute you good sir/madame
And I tip my hat to You!
And I blew something up in your honor!

4922829 The chapter is in the proofreading stage, so your question will be resolved in a day or two max.