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Bass Canon
Greetings, fellow bronies! My alias for writing is Bass Canon, and she is my own creation. I tend to go from the family friendly slice-of-life stories to very fetishy adult stories.
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deffinatly want more.
MOAR PLZ
i was really excited to read this, then i read the first line. nope, so much nope
4518667 + eleventybillion.
Author, you need some serious editing and proof reading. Your first sentence is a freaking paragraph.
Any relation to the Puccini opera?
4519515 Yeah? Well I stole your face.
Okay joke aside, the problem is that every time I try to get a proofreader, nobody answers, NOBODY. I have tried for the last 3 days to find someone to reply to my ask to proofread it, but not a single person replied. At that point I just gave up and put the story up as it is, and given that I am not a native speaker, stylistic mistakes are bound to happen. One thing I do not understand, why is having a longer sentence at the beginning such a carnal sin that you just gave up on it?
4519653 No, not really. I chose the name mainly because of the drawing, and Flutters cutie mark.
Eh... no. Poor execution, OoC, and extreme plot contrivance. Sorry, but this is lacking. Find yourself an editor, and ask why you wish to hurt characters you, I can only assume, care about. But even if that doesn't matter, it's still not really engaging. Also, it needs a dark tag, maybe even tragedy depending on how you go with it.
(Reading the description) Holy $#!+ Batmane!
#my fetish
4519515 i was talking about it taking place after season 3 for the record
4520044 i will proofread for you if you want
4524842 Thank You for your willingness to do so, but the chapter has been proofread yesterday, and I already have received offers for the later ones.
4525150 aww shucks, well if you someone in the future im open
4525158 I will keep that in mind. In the meantime, you are most welcome to read it again, now that it's been checked.
That was stupid, like really stupid. All the female characters in this exsit only so some guy can wank to it... I like it!
One real criticism though, I don't think the clop was very well done, there wasn't enough to it and I felt a bit disappointed, but hey, I have a thing for dem evil corrupted ladies, in latex, so I'll let this one slid... For now.
more time and explicitness to the sex please, i love the concept but i feel like u didnt really give much time to the payoff
4570297 It's a stylistic choice more that anything, to be honest. The story itself is more centered around the aspect of temptation and giving in, rather than the sex itself. The next chapter will involve more detail, but not for the sake of being graphic, but rather to convey the conversion process.
i wonder if the bad guy is going to win one of these types of storys hmmmmm
If the fastest character in the setting cannot even touch her then what's the point of any of this? Just have her snap her fingers and rape everyone at once, it's not like we should expect it won't end that way.
There's a point at which there's no investment, even the minimal amount involved in fetish-material.
4582664 Ugh... here goes:
the bed by making the villain a potential threat might be a mistake. It's not like the show introduced such bad guys where the Main 6 had to find new power to beat.... no wait, they kinda did. There has to be a reason for her to do what she is going to do in the next chapter.
#1: I think you have made a mistake here, Rainbow Dash is not light, nor Sonic. Sure, she may be the fastest/best flyer in Equestria, but they were on the ground! Honestly, I think AJ had better chances than her in that situation.
#2 Yeah, giving a reason for Celestia to
I appreciate the critique, but your assumptions were off. Sure, I could have coped out by saying in this AU Rainbow was slower, but I think the explanation up there is a better one.
4582664 Just having her "snap her fingers" would be fine if you were looking for straight up sex, but corruption material is about the gradual changes, both to individuals and the setting as a whole. And believe me, finding the latter is magnitudes harder than finding the former. Beyond that, even if it is within Mistress Butterfly's power to instantly make everyone her slave (and this may or may not be the case), she strikes me as the type who would rather put in the effort to see her victims fight her and fail, than take the easy route. If you need an analogy, it's likely the same reason Discord didn't do everyone what he eventually had to do to Fluttershy.
@Bass Canon: One bit does strike me as odd.
Now, I imagine Celestia's a fast reader, but assuming this magic started counting down when she opened the letter (as opposed to when she saw that sentence), she'd have to read it, process it, then do the location and teleportation all within those ten seconds. Doable for Celestia, I'm sure, but if it's Mistress Butterfly's intent for Celestia to summon the remaining three, the timeframe seems just tight enough to be risky. The alternative explanation I can think of for this is if Mistress Butterfly didn't actually imbue said magic into the letter, and the short timeframe is meant to make Celestia panic and not check the letter for said magic (in other words, a bluff). With her power, though, I can't see a reason for Mistress Butterfly to do that.
4583494 Oh that? Well, I went for the "Mission Impossible" thing, so it should probably say "once you finish this letter." A small oversight, but once Twilight comes back to Ponyville, you will see what MB meant.
You know, at first I was not aiming at a "Power Ponies" angle, but that is what this story is becoming, and fast! 
To me, this is even scarier than Cupcakes.
4583777 Is that a bad thing or a good thing? I can never tell if people want to be scared or not.
4583787 Dont take it as a bad thing. Its good as in "Ill read this but not in the dark feeling".
4583805 If Mistress Butterfly is scary to you, I did my job.
If there is no respect for the villain, why even bother having a hero?
I made a group! Yes, it's quite the accomplishment, I know. So, if you enjoy ponies in (or made of, or made into) latex, come and join "Latex Ponies"!
LATEX PONIES
I like the way this is laid out. If you were going around corrupting people/ponies, you don't want it over quickly, that would be boring, so making it fun and different and even a bit of a challenge is more how it should be done. It's so hard to find decent fan fics that do that, so this is like a diamond amongst insta-rape fics, so keep it up
Well said brother...or sister
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4583852 Thank You for the words of encouragement. I am sure you will enjoy the next part. Working title: "Perception of Light".
4583888 Hehe, well Bass is a mare, that is for sure.
4583975 And Linkman is a man
4584275 Well the author is a male, but the OC is a mare. Yeah, go figure.
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still liking it so far, cant wait to see more f/f mind control goodness!!
Interesting story
When is the next chapter gonna be released? I must know what happens next
4590765 Finals are merciless, but I can say that the raw story is not done yet, the draft is.
btw if transformations r gonna be a part of this, and omfg do i love transformations, can i suggest a lamia (la-mare-ia?) for somepony? theres absolutely nothing in the world sexier then snake women/snake mares
well... this turned out to be different from what I thought it would be^^ Am I right to assume that "Mistress Butterfly" is the same being that turned Luna into Nightmare?
4620595 In a way, yes. Her origins are revealed in the next chapter, and I hope you will find the cause a bit more fresh than the usual. But as for Nightmare Moon, you can consider her the residue of MB's earlier "work" on the princesses.
4676962 huh, I see^^ interesting^^
Oh I'm loving this so far (its criminally rare to find a good femdom or dominatrix fic here.)
Anyway I did notice you haven't uploaded a new chapter in a while I hope that don't mean you've abandoned it. Be a shame if you have I'm loving where this is going.
In any case I did need to ask why Mistress Butterfly keeps taking away there pony aspects you'd think she'd want to retain Fluttershy's ability to fly.
4708922 Don't worry, I am just taking my time with the next chapter. Fluttershy was always insecure in her own ability, and the fact she becomes as far away from her own being while in Butterfly mode reinforces that. Also, she can just teleport wherever her influence is felt, so no need to fly.
i cant wait for more
4728492 Patience, I hope it will be worth it.
Mmm, rereading this story during the wait for the next chapter never gets any less arousing. I eagerly await the update of this (and all your other stories, for that matter) with a burning fire. Can't wait to see some of the other transformations to come!
I love your work, Bass. Keep it up.
4732446 CMP's latest chapter is almost done, so you can look forward to that.
if you are planing on defeating Mistress Butterfly perhaps you could branch the story.... one branch where she is defeated and one where she wins and is victorious!?!?
4904831 That was the idea from the start.