Chapter 1: Betrayed
"What a day," I sighed as I slumped into my bed, "I'm glad I finally finished that chapter of PC. I wonder how others will re..."
"Hey DF."
I looked to my right to see who the high, chipper voice belonged to... of course, I already knew who it was.
"Hey Pinkie," I smiled, "how have you been?"
"I'm doing great" Pinkie exclaimed, but I noticed her usual smile wasn't as enjoyable as it normally is.
"Something wrong," I asked
"Oh, well I have something to ask you," Pinkie said.
"What?"
"Well... some strange things has been happening to me... and it's starting to scare me. I'm not blaming you, but you are the only one who has the key to our world."
"I don't remember writing anything that would harm or mess with you."
"Well... it's freaking me out and I'm scared to go back... can I... can I sleep with you tonight."
"Of course Pinkie," I smiled. Seeing anything besides happiness on her face broke my heart, so I was willing to do anything to comfort her.
"Thanks, DF," Pinkie smiled as she climbed into my bed and curled up into a ball like a dog next to me, "Goodnight."
"Goodnight," I chuckled, turning out my side lamp. I stayed up for a bit with my arm around Pinkie as she fell asleep.
Yes, I'm a human, but I have a special connection with Pinkie. For as long as I can remember, she would break the fourth wall in my stories, but do it in ways you could never imagine. She would actually leave her world and visit me. I don't know how and sometimes I think even Pinkie doesn't know, but I don't mind. I love seeing her and she is always so happy to see me. While I laid in my bed, I thought about what Pinkie said. Strange things happening in Equestria? That doesn't sound good... oh well, I should probably get some sleep. I put my headphones on as I listen to my favorite songs and slept...
I don't know what woke me up, but automatically I shot out of my bed in the late of the night. I looked to my right and saw that Pinkie was gone... and so was my tablet. I rubbed my eyes, got out of bed, and looked out my bedroom door.
"Pinkie," I called, "where are you?"
"Behind you Derps," a voice I knew said behind me.
"Olor?"
I turned around to see my friend... or I thought he was my friend. He had his hand around a struggling Pinkie's mouth and neck.
"What are you doing with Pinkie," I demanded.
"I'm tired of you having all the fame," he growled, "now I'm stealing the show."
He had my tablet in his hand and held it next to Pinkie as she was sucked in to her story.
"Pinkie," I exclaimed.
"Your turn," he yelled before he hit me in the head with something hard.
I heard him laugh menacingly before my vision and sound went completely dark...
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I suddenly opened my eyes and started breathing quickly. I got up and looked around as I calmed down and saw floating islands in a place that looked like purple space.
I started to walk around until a dark mass appeared in front of me. I was startled and took a few steps back as the mass took a more physical form... a more pony form.
"Greeting Derpyforever," declared a voice.
"Who are you," I asked.
"You should know, You do write our stories... of course you may not. I am Princess Luna."
"Luna? What are you doing here?"
"Olor has betrayed you. He took control of your stories... except for one. You must find a way out and stop Olor from destroying your reputation or no one will read your stories anymore, your stories will no longer have meaning, and our world will die off."
"How of I get out?"
"Pinkie."
"Pinkie?"
"Yes, in this one, Pinkie is Celestia's daughter, but my poor sister died at the hands of Blueblood. Only Pinkie know how to leave stories and you must protected her."
"Protect her? From what?"
"This may be an undetected story, but it fell into a world of chaos, so your going to need gear."
"Where am I going to get gear?"
"There."
Luna pointed to an island way off in the distance.
"How am I going to get out there," I exclaimed.
"Well, first you'll need this" Luna replied, then focused as her eyes glown white and a beam hit me.
At first, I didn't feel anything, then a sharp pain came from my... hoof?!
"I'm a po-ah," I gasped in pain as a weird mark appeared on my brown hoof.
"There, now go."
"Wait, what is...," I stopped when I looked back and saw Luna was gone and was replaced with a tiny thing, I approached it and held it in my hoof.
"What is this," I said examining it closer.
"You can call me the heart," a voice said in my head, making me jump, "when ever you are lost, you can always talk to me to find the way."
"Ok... how do I get to that island," I asked.
"The mark you now have is one given to few. Use it with caution and responsibility," the heart replied.
"How do I use my mark," I asked.
"You will know how... I must leave for now," the heart said.
"Wait, what are your talking about?"
I didn't get a response.
"Worthless piece of junk," I grumbled. Then felt the top of my head and looked at my back.
"Him, no wings or a horn. So I ain't getting over there by flying... but maybe by teleportation."
I looked closely at the mark on my hoof and saw the mark to be more familiar than I thought it was.
"I should have known," I chuckled, "the Outsider mark. Ok, let's see if this works."
I looked at a nearby floating rock and focused. I wasn't sure how I did it, but the little blue spot appeared. I flicked by marked hoof and I appeared on the rock.
I did it a few more times and appeared on the island where the gear Luna said would be. I approached the gear only to find the sword and a belt.
"Corvo's sword," I smiled in awe.
I grabbed the sword and put it in the belt before my vision started to flicker into darkness
"What the..."
It turned into I nothing as I looked around... then... I heard something... a laugh. Not an evil laugh, sort of a childish giggle.
My vision the turned a bright white as I heard a voice that sounded distance, "D... DF... DF come catch me... Play hide and seek with me..."
"Who's that?"
"DF... play the game with me... DF?..."
My vision started to fade into a smiling face with a pink mane and coat.
"DF! Your awake," the foal smiled
"P-Pinkie?"
(To Be Continued...)
that is a....... strange pre.......
okay seriously, bluebloodk illing celestia? even if he grew a pair we are talking about likerly a mediocre unicorn killing a demigod with not only magic butr physical attributes and likely a thousand years of experienceo f dodging assassins.
this is getting to a good start. I did not expect a story like this. good luck with it .
4500888 Well I didn't have much to chose from. Chrysi already has a role, Discord is too OP and Tirek wasn't around yet... So, yeah, I'll figure out something... If he final grew a pair so true!
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4500906
Well, there's always the Alicorn Amulet. 'course that would mean he'd barely be in control of his actions to begin with, and I'm not sure if that's an angle you want to take.
4500912 I thought Twi destroyed it in the episode?
4500889 thx, glad you liked it
4500912 yeaaaaah...... no. if you take a look at trixie, who while nowhere near twilight's level was still a competent magic user overall, likely more so than blueblood, i would argue she was roughly tiwlight sparkle's alicorn level of magically competent.
twilight is still far weaker than Celestia or Luna. so yeah....... still don' work. normally when something like that is named after something it is made to make up for a lack. a titan's gauntlet or something does not literally make you strong AS a titan, just strung. so logically the alicorn amulet makes you strong like an alicorn, not AS strong as an alicorn by any imagination. at least as strong as alicorns as old and experience as celestia and luna.
4500980 derped it four a secndbut I think I follow... However, Twi was not able to beat Trixie. not saying I like that, but Twi had to use smokes and mirrors to trick Trixie, so it made her. MOre powerful, but more arrogant.
Ooh this looks cool.
0.0 What just happened?
4500989 thx
4500987 when she was a unicorn, she is now an alicorn.
4501004 but until the season four finale, she might as well be as powerful as her unicorn self... No offense twi
4501004 you know what, I'll just settle this once and for all, I going to go write the next chapter
4500980
We have absolutely nothing to base that on. Unless Twilight manages an age spell now (noted to be only possible for high-level Unicorns at a time when Alicorn and Unicorn magic was not discriminated between) it's absolutely logical to assume Trixie was more powerful then than Twilight is now.
And, for the record, old edition girdle of ogre strength did actually make you as strong as an ogre^^
4500914
Nope, they hid it with Zecora.