Living alone in a world full of ponies is tiresome sometimes, thankfully it isn't that kind of story, with the aid of his 'uncles' and his new friends perhaps he can live in this new home of his, and perhaps find love.
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4492908 I don't want to bother you with more work if you don't want to.
From what I understood the story sounds interesting, but you are in serious need of an editor. Not so much for say spelling but for grammar and in straighting out your past and present tenses.
I know there an editor group on this site so I would really recommend putting in a request for one.
A few things. One: is English your first language? Two: this seems a bit rushed. Three: I get it but still confused.
4495410 Sadly English is my first language so I have no excuse on the grammars being terrible, second it is sorta rush, honestly I just wanted to get this out of the way for the exposition to end and focus on the story, I'm slowly realizing that perhaps I should look over a bit and try to make it not rushed. Thirdly is the back story confusing? Or the character themselves?
Both the back story and the characters are confusing so just slow down, take a breath and look it over. I appreciate your honesty. I'm only a beginner writer as well so I can't tell you much but what I can say is to contact an editor or a friend to help you with the grammar and slow down a bit.
Okay. I feel sorry for 'the Boy'. So, he is going to need somepony to love and care for him before he gets his memory back. First, he has to be told where he is and why, then he has to be introduced to the masses. He has a long road ahead of him. A very long road indeed.
4500892 Right.
4502611 Thankfully he has his 'uncles' to help him out, but yes he does have a long road ahead of him.
Well this seems quite promising
damm he had a fucked up year,An longway to go before he can have a normal life.
Like your one talk bitch