squeee i love this pair so much! I need more coltcuddling in my life just a few minor errors: Macintosh felt happy to be with Mel, happy that he couldn’t keep his eyes off of him…
Macintosh, eyes close din exhaustion had fallen forward onto Caramel a bit, making the beige pony scream
...but to Caramel it sounded like so much more… Found another grammer error, but other than spelling/grammer, the story is amazing. Keep writing the stories and we'll take care of the grammer.
Caramel wasn’t the most emotionally stable pony there was before the incident, with his cutie mark of three blue horseshoes reflecting his talent for losing things and screwing up and the ridicule that comes with such a talent.
Ummmm... dude, i dont know what kind symbolism your looking at, but im pretty sure horseshoes are a symbol of luck.... Im not quite sure where you got that interpretation from. If you can explain it to me im all ears though.
I'm crossing my fingers caramel doesnt end up being to effeminate... sry guys it just really turns me off
Oh caramel, why can't you stop losing things.
Mac, I knew you were a creeper!
Great story, I have high hopes for this story
M/M relationships are an affront to the Greater Good.
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20868 dont even go there u evil sad loser. M/M is perfectly fine. u dont like? then dont read it
Why did I get a boner?
this is so cute, gay or otherwise its a great story
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It's okay, you're not alone.
squeee i love this pair so much!
I need more coltcuddling in my life
just a few minor errors:
Macintosh felt happy to be with Mel, happy that he couldn’t keep his eyes off of him…
Macintosh, eyes close din exhaustion had fallen forward onto Caramel a bit, making the beige pony scream
This gave me so many feels
...but to Caramel it sounded like so much more…
Found another grammer error, but other than spelling/grammer, the story is amazing. Keep writing the stories and we'll take care of the grammer.
Ummmm... dude, i dont know what kind symbolism your looking at, but im pretty sure horseshoes are a symbol of luck.... Im not quite sure where you got that interpretation from. If you can explain it to me im all ears though.
I'm crossing my fingers caramel doesnt end up being to effeminate... sry guys it just really turns me off