152483 I wasn't so mcuh attempting to make this a mystery as I was filling in the holes in Caramels background, this fic was never intended to be a "incest" fic, but its also supposed to deal with the problems a homosexual relationship in a rural setting. So it is what it is
Ah, I think I get it now. Sorry if I sounded scornful earlier ,I'm in an awful mood. I am considering reading C-.. you know the rest, that how much of a vindictive mood I'm in at the moment
Jonagold and Granny Smith gained much "respect bro" in here. Telling what are basically the most important members of their family off like that takes some serious guts to pull of. And I only type it like this because everything else doesn´t express me strong enough. keep going.
I wait forever for this to update and this is what I get?!?!?!
This is what I say to you......
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i hope you keep making more updates, just this time i'd like to request a little less time in between
152397 have new laptop so hopefully if school and job will allow it all my stories will update a bit more regularly.
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I agree. Somewhat disappointing, and it seems like the author tried to branch off into a mystery/shipping hybrid, which I don't think worked too well.
Grammar and punctuation is a bit off too, though that can happen when you're excited about a story
Valiant effort, OP, just please stick to shipping, that's something you're very good at
Magnificent, I have waited a long time for this to update. Thank you
152483 I wasn't so mcuh attempting to make this a mystery as I was filling in the holes in Caramels background, this fic was never intended to be a "incest" fic, but its also supposed to deal with the problems a homosexual relationship in a rural setting. So it is what it is
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Ah, I think I get it now.
Sorry if I sounded scornful earlier ,I'm in an awful mood. I am considering reading C-.. you know the rest, that how much of a vindictive mood I'm in at the moment
Good story though.
153179 so now that its been confirmed as non incest I can be as cloppy as I want
Applause and delight! Non-incest, and very touching. I love it.
Jonagold and Granny Smith gained much "respect bro" in here. Telling what are basically the most important members of their family off like that takes some serious guts to pull of. And I only type it like this because everything else doesn´t express me strong enough. keep going.
We have been forgotten, it seems.
153301 , this is unacceptable!
UPDATES!
196057 I promise you have not been forgotten, I will update the moment I have free time and the story comes to me promise.
ALL OF MY YES!!!!!!!