Every mare in Equestria has to deal with heat on a regular basis. It usually isn't much of a problem. Applejack is like every other mare in Equestria. She usually can deal with it without troubles. Usually...
I know I'll get downvoted for this, but I just can't see how that was supposed to be hot. Sure, AJ in heat? Hot. No pun intended. AJ looking for a stallion to rut in the midst of a storm? Hot. As. Hell. Stallion she picks is a donkey? ....You've lost me.
I just... I just can't see it. Sure, it would make sense, but I couldn't get it right in my head. I have no idea why and it annoys me.
You're probably having trouble due to the canon donkey characters established in the show... the only male donkey we've seen is Cranky Doodle Donkey, not quite the ideal portrayal of a studly donkey.
4415476 I'm a little surprised that it would be so weird to you... Real-world donkeys are very similar to horses. Even more with ponies, since they're the same size... Maybe 4415493 has a point. Since FiM only has one male donkey and that guy is old Cranky... Yeah, he's not sexy.
4415566 Oh yeah, definitely cute. But I still don't know why. I mean, I've seen donkeys. I live with horses (bonus for living on a farm) and I've seen ponies. And I still can't make the correlations between AJ and a donkey schoodelypooping together.
4415579 Maybe that feels out of character for AJ? I know that I can't get behind most inter mane-6 shipping because I think it completely destroys a huge part of their characterization.
That, or you're specist. Shame on you!
Brilliant use of the word "schoodelypooping", though.
Well, I, for one, found this to be very funny and sexy. Plus, as an added bonus, AJ most likely won't have to worry about getting pregnant. Well, I think donkeys and ponies can breed, but in this world. Equestria? Who knows. I can only imagine that would cause some grief in the family. The out of wedlock part, not the donkey part. No racist Apples, thank you very much.
Also:
I know that I can't get behind most inter mane-6 shipping because I think it completely destroys a huge part of their characterization.
I... I love you. I fight this fight all the time, arguing that it devalues their friendships and ruins their dynamic.
Mules are cannon in the show, so it has to be possible. Also, it would give me the chance to write a pregnant Applejack. And a shotgun wedding, or whatever ponies have instead of shotguns
Heh, we'll see about that later, depending on how serious I want to make this story. For now, let's just focus on the sexy times.
Yes, romance can follow later. For now, let us simply focus on what really matters: AppleButt getting her apple butt pounded by a gigantic donkey dick while huge balls bounce off her perfect apple butt.
Hmm... Sal's sexual taunting of Applejack intrigues me. *scribble scribble* Certainly, as different species, they would have different cultures, including courtship and mating. I can understand how AJ would be pissed at how he acted at first, and how he might be confused with her presentation. Looking forward to future installments. ...butts!
5367936 That's pretty much it. I did my research before working on this story and it turns out, donkeys are not as straightforward as horses when it comes to mating, with a lot of teasing from the males. I thought it would be funny to include that, especially with how desperate AJ is at that point
I know I'll get downvoted for this, but I just can't see how that was supposed to be hot. Sure, AJ in heat? Hot. No pun intended. AJ looking for a stallion to rut in the midst of a storm? Hot. As. Hell. Stallion she picks is a donkey? ....You've lost me.
I just... I just can't see it. Sure, it would make sense, but I couldn't get it right in my head. I have no idea why and it annoys me.
Quite the chapter... loved it!
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You're probably having trouble due to the canon donkey characters established in the show... the only male donkey we've seen is Cranky Doodle Donkey, not quite the ideal portrayal of a studly donkey.
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I'm a little surprised that it would be so weird to you... Real-world donkeys are very similar to horses. Even more with ponies, since they're the same size... Maybe 4415493 has a point. Since FiM only has one male donkey and that guy is old Cranky... Yeah, he's not sexy.
At least not when he's old. Weren't they cute, years ago?
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4415566 Oh yeah, definitely cute. But I still don't know why. I mean, I've seen donkeys. I live with horses (bonus for living on a farm) and I've seen ponies. And I still can't make the correlations between AJ and a donkey schoodelypooping together.
I dunno, I need to look into this.
Also;
“This can’t be over too soon. Ah’ve got more important things to do than diddle myself all day long…”
No AJ... no you don't...
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Maybe that feels out of character for AJ? I know that I can't get behind most inter mane-6 shipping because I think it completely destroys a huge part of their characterization.
That, or you're specist. Shame on you!
Brilliant use of the word "schoodelypooping", though.
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Well, I, for one, found this to be very funny and sexy. Plus, as an added bonus, AJ most likely won't have to worry about getting pregnant. Well, I think donkeys and ponies can breed, but in this world. Equestria? Who knows. I can only imagine that would cause some grief in the family. The out of wedlock part, not the donkey part. No racist Apples, thank you very much.
Also:
I... I love you. I fight this fight all the time, arguing that it devalues their friendships and ruins their dynamic.
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Mules are cannon in the show, so it has to be possible. Also, it would give me the chance to write a pregnant Applejack. And a shotgun wedding, or whatever ponies have instead of shotguns
Heh, we'll see about that later, depending on how serious I want to make this story. For now, let's just focus on the sexy times.
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Yes, romance can follow later. For now, let us simply focus on what really matters: AppleButt getting her apple butt pounded by a gigantic donkey dick while huge balls bounce off her perfect apple butt.
Can you tell yet what body part I prefer?
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Ass, so much assNah, gotta be balls
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Though balls do hold their appeal... Especially when they hold a lot of spooge...
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More balls, then? Okay, I'll keep that in mind for the next chapters.
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Joke's on you. I'm more than okay with this!
Wow, this sure is something, alright!
Sal's one lucky son of a (gun/bitch/mongoose), that's for sure!
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Life is good for smutty fiction characters, isn't it?
Hmm... Sal's sexual taunting of Applejack intrigues me. *scribble scribble* Certainly, as different species, they would have different cultures, including courtship and mating. I can understand how AJ would be pissed at how he acted at first, and how he might be confused with her presentation.
Looking forward to future installments.
...butts!
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That's pretty much it.
I did my research before working on this story and it turns out, donkeys are not as straightforward as horses when it comes to mating, with a lot of teasing from the males. I thought it would be funny to include that, especially with how desperate AJ is at that point