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Capitalize 'a' and there is a double space before this sentence
Dovr, iluvw ylhz.
5193423
This isn't an OSF story. Go back to reviewing shitty stories.
Frieza. You got some 'splaining to do.
5231969
It's going to be all explained. That said... The horrible stallion she's talking about is someone who has been introduced into the Vogonverse already. The other stuff is going to be introduced later.
RJP formerly LF
5231974 You changed your name? Cool. Now, in which story (or stories) has this horrible man been introduced in. Sorry, I don't read all of the Vogonverse stories.
5231984
He was introduced in Diamond in the Rough, in the last chapter of it actually
Aww, this is a nice and sweet chapter. I like it.
beautiful end to the story mate.
here's hoping for a sequel?
OH NOW IM DOING A REVIEW OF THIS.
you aren't going to like it.
5308625
Okay.
How has this eluded me? Now wheres V when you need him?
One small detail, it is Functional, right?
Please fix the description, even a Mature story should be treated with flawless spelling, I hope?
I do like the idea you expressed in the description, even if I am unsure as to exactly what you mean.
Since I don't know what you asked for, but there is a joint missing between the legs and the hooves, otherwise it does look great.
I like the way you made her hooves red/dark pink, matching her mane and tail as well. I would make the same choice, I guess, even if it looks a bit strange in light of the Canon on the detail. Still, the tags on the story does support this small deviation, from where I see it.
Consider going over the Summary as well, just to make sure it is perfect, there are a few details that feels slightly off.
Uh, and why is there a chapter with a word-count on 21,000, when the average is less then 3,000?
Guess I'll just leave you to consider, if and what to do with the suggestions I just passed over to you?
5697771
Thanks
Glad that you're enjoying the story.
I've noticed you have one for adagio dazzle will we one for sonata dusk? And I be heard about the custom order ones is anyway I can get the afore mentioned fic for me I was hoping for one with sonata and sunset shimmer based on a fic on this site called "evening sonata" I'm not sure if I can star in it or not though if its ok please message me back but I recomend reading evening sonata and if the authors ok with it I may ask the author myself just need the link to the volgonverse group page