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What caused the fire? This won't end well.
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(Yep, that's pretty much what happened and is what's happening.)
You're just a regular updating Nancy, aren't ya? it takes me days, even weeks to update. that's partially because I'm lazy and unsure where I should lead things.
Anyway, things are heating up-not a pun- in this tale. Can't wait to see what happens next, m8.
This is the first chapter I can say I didn't like. Oh, it was written, but the bureaucracy of this time makes me sick. You go to see a doctor in an emergency and you're in debt for the rest of your life. It like the miners of the 1900's that inspired this song:
The main chorus, at least. Plus, Andy's parents show up? This just keeps getting better and better.
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I know, but it is the way of the world they are in. Andy was lucky enough to be talented enough to make a living off of his writing. There's a pretty big call for anything that can help someone escape from the world around them. Andy's talent has let him live a fairly good life so far, and for the most part that's all that Pinkie's really been exposed to. The world outside of the moderately nice neighborhood that Andy lives in is fairly different.
Corporate Farms that hire employees with the promises of a decent salary. Of course they neglect to tell them that they will be paying for rent, food, shelter, and clothing from their company stores. Naturally their company stores are a few times more expensive than anything outside of the Corporate Farms. On top of that you have the volatile neighborhoods like the Stacks. Places so overcrowded that things are absolutely miserable in them. Adding in with the fact that bathroom meth is still being made because it's such a cheap drug, and again it's selling because it provides an escape.
The World the Ponies are coming into is broken, but maybe they have a chance to fix it.
4940469 You are one of the ones that can See. You can See the Problems, and you portray them in your writing. Thank you.