4422046 A man on a mission is the strongest man you will ever meet btw the sex gore and such has not set in yet that is coming as soon as my editor finishes with the remaining chapters for me to start a new chapter
4487732 INFINITELY better. One thing that makes me a little iffy, though, is having his parents die in 9/11. That's probably just a personal thing tho. Well done!
4487741 I wanted 9/11 to be his backstory to why he becomes Shadow as you know every hero has an origin and I wanted James's to be original and not something written before.
4363710
could you rephrase your question I don't understand what your asking
4363727
Think of it this way.
'Pre-Prologue: The Theory'
'Prologue'
'Chapter 1: A Second Chance At A New Life'
Try to edit your chapter titles so they're like this.
4363768 now I get it thanks, for second there I thought you wanted me to change the title name
"Mature · Sex · Gore"
Shit man. This stuff's too hardcore for me.
4422046 A man on a mission is the strongest man you will ever meet
btw the sex gore and such has not set in yet that is coming as soon as my editor finishes with the remaining chapters for me to start a new chapter
4487732 INFINITELY better. One thing that makes me a little iffy, though, is having his parents die in 9/11. That's probably just a personal thing tho. Well done!
4487741 I wanted 9/11 to be his backstory to why he becomes Shadow as you know every hero has an origin and I wanted James's to be original and not something written before.
4487785 kewl
4487801 indeed