What lengths would you go to for the sake of fitting in? How far will you go to cover your past? These are questions I ask myself every day. But there's one question that will haunt me until death; Am I really the monster?
First chapter provided adequate and a good amount of description as to what happened and where he went, along with giving us a basic understanding of how everything is happening. good chapter, detail was just as good as it painted an image of his surroundings. only complaint. beginning of chapter felt a bit long, but then again, that is totally acceptable as all first chapters feel off... just gives the reader the flow of the story for later on.
First chapter provided adequate and a good amount of description as to what happened and where he went, along with giving us a basic understanding of how everything is happening. good chapter, detail was just as good as it painted an image of his surroundings. only complaint. beginning of chapter felt a bit long, but then again, that is totally acceptable as all first chapters feel off... just gives the reader the flow of the story for later on.