This year of college got off to a rough start. Luckily, my new roommate remembered to grocery shop. I was able to grab some of his muffins before class. To top it off, now I'm sick and my body seems to be changing, and I don't know why.
This story, I like! I didn't know how much I can enjoy TF stories... hm, well, the more you know! Continue please, as fast as possible! I want to read more of this delicious story!
4340616 Story of my life... If I can find a way to do all that without editors giving me ptsd flashbacks to grade school and over zealous parents, I will.
Goddamnit, Kaidan. Stop making stories for me to follow! It's not like I spend too much of my life on here anyway! But really, please do keep writing. Especially if I can get off to it.
I like where this is going.
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Both chapters could use a little more show, a little less tell, a little more fleshing-out, and a lot less of a rush.
These are good ideas, though. Curiousity's got me, and I realize college makes time a bit tight at times.
This fic is awesometasticrific!
You deserve a cookie for this! no really. get up and go get you one right now!
This story, I like!
I didn't know how much I can enjoy TF stories... hm, well, the more you know!
Continue please, as fast as possible!
I want to read more of this delicious story!
-Zeph
Looks great so far.
awesome!!!
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Story of my life... If I can find a way to do all that without editors giving me ptsd flashbacks to grade school and over zealous parents, I will.
I love this story.
Goddamnit, Kaidan. Stop making stories for me to follow! It's not like I spend too much of my life on here anyway!
But really, please do keep writing. Especially if I can get off to it.
Ok... This is kinda weird and creepy with how it ends up... I love it! Keep writing!
Wait, WHAT!!!
You threw a Five Score, Divided by Four reference in this!
...
Gg...
Can't wait to read more of this! Please keep it up.
I will never eat a muffin in my life after reading this. I am way too terrified. Legit: *sees a muffin* *Runs away screaming*
5587871 Meh, I guess I would be