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Kaidan
Q(^_^Q). The friendliest misanthrope you'll ever meet.
Kaidan
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I like where this is going.
i.imgur.com/U1Jq0MA.jpg
Both chapters could use a little more show, a little less tell, a little more fleshing-out, and a lot less of a rush.
These are good ideas, though. Curiousity's got me, and I realize college makes time a bit tight at times.
This fic is awesometasticrific!
You deserve a cookie for this! no really. get up and go get you one right now!
This story, I like!
I didn't know how much I can enjoy TF stories... hm, well, the more you know!
Continue please, as fast as possible!
I want to read more of this delicious story!
-Zeph
Looks great so far.
awesome!!!
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Story of my life... If I can find a way to do all that without editors giving me ptsd flashbacks to grade school and over zealous parents, I will.
One story ends, another begins
Looks pretty good so far. Love slow transformations
Eww
I love this story.
Goddamnit, Kaidan. Stop making stories for me to follow! It's not like I spend too much of my life on here anyway!
But really, please do keep writing. Especially if I can get off to it.
I'll probably come back to this, but I'm not sure I wanted to know already just how bleak this is going to get and how long it will last. No tragedy tag, though I'm not sure what to make of that...
Ok... This is kinda weird and creepy with how it ends up... I love it!
Keep writing!
Wait, WHAT!!!
You threw a Five Score, Divided by Four reference in this!
...
Gg...
Can't wait to read more of this! Please keep it up.
Well...that escalated quickly. I have been thoroughly enjoying your stories. Than you for continuing to write them.
Well shit.
But this dark is my dark. I can upvote to this.
Oh boy, this is gold!
I absolutely love how the story advances forward, it's finally showing the darker elements, the actions behind and the future happenings as well (I mean, I can see what will happen).
Well, great job, keep it up, keep writing!
-Zeph
Holy crap... this is ridiculous .-.
I like it so far can't wait to see what happens next.But parts of it where sad I hope one day some one helps her to truly be free.
What an assholeL If i was there id shoot his head off!!!!!!!!
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Really?
I'd put him in a death grip
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i would stab him like jello.
STABSTABSTABSTAB
Matt =
i hate matt but love derek/derpy's inner thoughts
and so the humiliation continues.
Very good chapter, and yeah, Matt is a sick bastard.
I find this terrifying, and yet I can't stop reading.
Hoooooly Mackerel, a new chapter!
And it's a personality change describer at that! Hohohoh, this is fun!
I just wonder... where is this Matt getting those muffins? Also, if not eaten for a longer time, would the TF effect disappear?
Hmmmmm....
But anyway great chapter, long awaited, I'm happy to know that you didn't forget about the story!
-Zeph
Poor Derek. The description of that ballgag sounds dreadful
At least we know he'll end up okay. Well, sort of.
Fuck, that hurt.
Reminds me a bit of A Full Tummy.
I think I'm enjoying this read a lot more than I should.
You sexy motherfucker.
Honestly...
I wouldn't mind being in Derek's position
I'm weird aren't i
Sexy muffin time~
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Nope. If wanting to be in Derek's position is weird, I don't want to be normal.
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This is such a sexual turn-off and such an emotional... I'm not sure what the right word is for a non-sexual kind of turn-on. Fetish implies the wrong things.
oh well uh
I hope Matt is found out and is punished.
5272925 I Hope that fucking a pony mare turns that bastard into a pony mare too.
Ah, a new chapter, terrific!
This fight between the tranforming muffins' mind-changing effect and Derek's old mind, it's already a lost battle.
Since the beginning was about them being in Matt's apartment, it's clear that Derek, or more precisely, Derpy, will never get a happy ending. I wonder why other readers couldn't figure this thing out. Well anyway. Continue this work of strange and rare story, I'm deeply interested.
-Zeph
This kind of reminds me of David Cronenberg's The Fly.
Anxiously awaiting further installments... ^///^
Great story, so what's next?
I will never eat a muffin in my life after reading this. I am way too terrified. Legit: *sees a muffin*
*Runs away screaming*
ooooo I love it ^^ Find one spelling error :P
"schlopping” sound as he rubbed my face in irt." I believe its suppost to be It :P
5110832 No your not weird c; And when "Deirk" said the "Okay, Master!" I put a hand to my chest and gasped XD
5557515 I don't think theres a next :O I hope so c;
If I requested this be continued, would it be ignored?
Kaiden, can you please continue this story. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?