“Ow, don’t bite so hard!” Twilight flinched in pain, as Spike bit into her leg. Spike drank his share of blood and moved away so Sweetie Belle could drink.
“Sorry, I can’t help it! These teeth are so sharp, that skin is like butter to them!” Spike opened his mouth to show his fangs. Twilight gasped in pain as Sweetie bit into her other leg.
“I feel so weak now, did you have to drink so much Spike?” Sweetie stopped, and looked back guiltily.
“Sorry Twilight, I might have drank more than I should have.”
“Sweetie, you need to control your hunger! We could kill somepony if we don’t!”
“I’m okay, I just need to rest for a minute.” Twilight cast a healing spell on herself. “That’s better! Spike, could you go get me my advanced mana potion from my lab?”
“Sure, I’ll be right back!” Spike hurriedly left the room.
“Now, Sweetie Belle, I wanna talk to you about what happened down in the basement.” Sweetie looked up at Twilight with a flustered expression on her face.
“W-what about it?” Sweetie Belle started sweating nervously.
“Spike didn’t force you to do that did he?”
“What! No, no no no! No! Why would you even ask that!”
“Princess Celestia said that when dragons reach sixteen years of age, they no longer feel simple emotions. They feel each emotion with full force. In other words, if he get’s angry, he get’s really angry! And if he gets sad, he gets borderline suicidal! So I was just thinking, if Spike gets, you know, would he force himself on to anyone? I know he wouldn’t, he’s too gentle to do something like that, but it never hurts to make sure!” Sweetie had a thoughtful look on her face.
“So, if Spike loved somepony, he would love that pony with all his heart?”
“Sweetie, do you love Spike?”
“Yes, more than I’ve ever loved anyone. He’s the one I want to spend my life with.”
“You do know that if you marry a dragon, you become immortal as well?” Sweetie Belle looked down sadly.
“Yes, I know. And I thought about it before. I would hate to outlive all of my friends and family! But I would still have Spike, and you, you’re immortal now right? Because you’re a princess?” Now it was Twilight turn to look down sadly.
“Yeah, and not a day goes by that I don’t think about it.” The door opening snapped their attention away from the conversation, and to Spike entering the room with the mana potion.
“Sorry it took so long. I had to look for it, it wasn’t in the potions cabinet with the others.”
“It’s fine, Spike.” Twilight took the mana potion and downed it all in one drink. She shook from all the energy she just consumed. “That’s much better, now I have stuff to do. You two know the drill, stay here, and if anyone knocks, don’t answer!” Twilight locked the door as she went out. Sweetie looked at Spike.
“Now that we’re all alone, you wanna make out?”
“Hell yeah!”
Ha, good chapter. We got to hear alot more about your Spike and Sweetie relationship as well as Spike's nature as well (Which I feel might come into play later on). I find it funny that they were like make out when we all know they will do more then that. I hope Twi comes home and she goes to her room to look for them and they made a "mess" all over her bed. Or she (or for more drama have it be Rarity coming back to try to get more help finding Sweetie) walks in and hear Sweetie shouting some very "colorful things"
4180266 I imagine Rarity being jealous.
4180305 That all depends on what you would have Sweetie yelling when she walks in lol. But jealous Rarity is always a great thing (you know not counting that one story she went all crazy from it lol)
4180314 Oh the things I would have Sweetie scream! *rubs end of cliche evil villain mustache*
4180337 And comments like that is why I stick around lol
looks good
I know I going be hated for this, but you could combine the chapters to make it one chapter....other then that, I love the story.
4180871 I know short chapters aren't for everyone. Sorry, but If I do that, it will have so many horizontal lines that people will think I have a fetish for them. I guess I could do like a Stephen King thing, and have chapters contain their own chapters. But I don't know how many people would like that.
4181222 IDK I have gotten use to the short chapter style for this story. I don't take this as one of those stories with very deep and complicated plots (at leas as of right now). I see this as a story I read when I need a good laugh. Now I am not saying this couldn't be done over in a more serious style. But I enjoy the silly and comical style of this story, and I feel the short chapter format keep it where we get our laughs and less stress on the writer so we can get content at a steady pace.