Dream Gel - Personal Revelations:

by Ponyess

Revelation – Awakening: 2

Apparently, I had been nude all night. I'm usually wearing panties while I sleep. Only now, I had been asked, required to be nude. I had been told, that any clothes, garments or other objects in contact with my skin would distract me. I need nudity, in order for the dreams to reveal, what I need to know. I wanted to know, to move on. I need to know what bothered me, disturbed me, this is how to get in touch with my inner self, or it is what I had been told.

I had managed to slip the quilt off of me during sleep, some time in the night, more likely early than later?

I'm used to have a quilt on me, on top of the bed, just as I'm accustomed to wear my white panties and a matching top. I've been told, it is how we all were raised. Though I think the quilt is more than just that, it's a means of controlling your body heat, during the night.

I recall precious little about when I went to bed. I know I had been nude, naturally, which I still am. I could clearly feel this. I had had a massage, or I imagine that's how it had come down. Then, with the gel still on my body, it had apparently been absorbed by my skin fairly quickly. Close to instantaneously, I guess you could say.

With the quilt on, but entirely nude, I had then fallen asleep. I had been in the same room I am in now, or I imagine it was the same room. The details I do recall, indicate it is, since everything is exactly the way I recall from last night.

You may have expected a clinical all white room? What I had been given, is a room with green walls, almost as if I had been in a forest, or on a field of high grasses. Overhead, I could clearly see, what could pass for a clear blue summer's sky.

Matching the scene, the floor is a deep leaf green, such as the spring would commonly offer. The only furniture, a bed stand, on which to place clothes, glasses, or a book. Only I had neither on mine at this time. Maybe it is part of the treatment? I'm supposed to bare my innermost self, my hidden aspects.

Apparently, my head is still resting on a white pillow, I had not brushed it aside, like the quilt, now resting on the floor before the bed, on which I lay. I'm actually still on the top of the bed.

In the clear, but still dimmed down light, I can clearly see what had once passed for my right arm. Only now, I can see it is lemon yellow, a bright neon hue, as it were. Not only that, the arm, no longer looking like an arm of a girl at all. What I see, is the fore leg of a pony. A pony, such as I could have recognised from numerous films I used to love watching. The fact that I rarely had the time, watching them, these days. I guess I had merely suppressed the recollections?

Most of us girls used to love watching the films and playing with the plastic dolls. I never had an illusion as to what these dolls were, I still loved playing with them. The fact that they look like the characters in the films, is all I required back then. If they were highly unrealistic to some degree never stopped me, just as it never stopped any of my friends. Maybe it was the characterisation, or the cute looking ponies?

Only now, the characterisation had apparently surfaced, in my very flesh and blood. I guess it is fascinating. I never minded. I just had failed to realise, just how deep rooted this particular character was, in me.

Then the name surfaced. I'm 'Lemon Drop'. That's the body I am, and with that, I am her. Could you believe? I guess it is the character that struck me deepest?

Once I knew who I am, I had gathered my bearings, and my wits. Soon there after, I managed to slip out of the bed. My bed. This is after all my room.

Comments

[Sir Top Hat]

I like what your idea but I feel like too,much is unexplained

[Ponyess]

4111748 Just curious, is that any particular details you would like to see explained already, or in the near futire in the story?

I am going to post another chapter later this week, unless I forget or loose interest, that is.

The chapter is basically written, so I just need to have a final check before posting it.

[Sir Top Hat]

Yea, where is he?
Is this a universe where MLP exists?
Why is he where he is?
If he went because of his dreams shouldn't we now about them in the first chapter?

Of course there more but these should help just some constructive criticism

[Ponyess]

4111813 I may have to read the entire story again, it has been left in a 'mothbag', for far too long, and I realised it may fit within the site, which apparenly was proven now.

Centre/Clinic was mentiond, not sure how this 'translate' where you live, we name things slightly different, even from an English perspective.

MLP is mentioned, even if it was just films, but in some sense it has to exist for this story to make sense. at least to me.

Now I may need to state where the clinic would be, since I guess that may be of some interest?

I could take a few more questions?

[Sir Top Hat]

4111897 ok! Let's see...
Why did she yell at him to go to sleep? (Just a humor question.)
What is the "gel" that the woman is putting on him?
Why isn't he scared or surprised of his transformation?
Was he forced to do this or was it on purpose?
Is it a he or she?
Is this lady giving him some kind of DNA twisting drug?

[Ponyess]

4111942 the words 'told', 'responded', and 'stated' were used, so how is there yelling, mind you?

the gel is the agent that makes the transformation according to the dreams.
your conscious self is the 'character' of the dreem, and this dream is part of the treatment/therapy. It apparently was part of her, she just did not know it before, which is why she needed the therapy.

Not sure, but isn't some similiar therapy used in order to solve issues you can't quite recall where they came from?

The therapy is on perpose, and most of the explanation easily sold her the deal, in part due to her original problem, but also the promised massage as such.

sincew most of my characters are girls/women, or in our case, fillies/mares, it would be safe to asume she was a girl, changed into a filly.

it has not been specified, aside from the massage, nothing else had been applied, but the tests and samples taken.

[Sir Top Hat]

4112009 I just think too much is unexplained, mabye in the next chapter you can explain past events leading up to this point. But a story like this will need a bigger chapter for that.

[Ponyess]

4112069 oh, a chapter explaining more of why she came to the centre in the first place?
I guess there may be room for this too, just need to figure out exactly what to fill a chapter with.

[Sir Top Hat]

4112084 I've done this before, the chapter needs the main character to go throughout the day while reliving the past through a flashback or two.

[Greenie MaKuz]

This plot/story feels very rushed, as does the grammar and wording therein. Slow it all down and I might thumbs up this.

[Ponyess]

4112093 That's a curious situation, you've done stories like this?

Flashbacks I can do.

I guess just after she woke up may be the best time to pull both flash backs and realisations.

I'm trying to give her something to hold on to, and get a few things out and into the light of day.

[Ponyess]

4112135 I'll see what I can do to the effect.
pondering if more dialogue qould have helped the story, since it is close to voide of it, by the looks.

[Sir Top Hat]

4112145 well not really but I know what I'm talking about. I read many story's like that. It's kinda like knowing how to do so thing before your taught.
Does that make sense cause I confuse myself sometimes

[Ponyess]

4112195 the first part does.
oh wait, that's kind Pinkiey?
I know how that feels.

[Sir Top Hat]

4112215 Lolzzz

[Ponyess]

4112275 I guess most just wright her off, as written in for the laughts?
She may be convenient, saving us the troubles, just by knowing.
Just wait and see, when you're sending invitations to the next 'party for one'?
somehow, it feels as if they actually spoke to her.
no wonder she refused to go, after all the effort she had invested in the party she was holding?

[The_Machinist]

Get your shit together. I'm neutral at this point.