Awesome chapter, I especially like how you did the first fight. One thing though : Isaac's jet boosters only work in zero-gravity, so him flying off like that wouldn't work. Then again, pegasi flying with those tiny wings wouldn't work either. Maybe put in a mention of Isaac noticing the gravity here to be a lot lighter than Earth and remembering that when he's running away and activates his jet boots. Or maybe have Isaac use the jet boots as a last-ditch effort , as he can't outrun the guards on foot, and is suprised when they work because magic.
Oh yea.... Completely forgot about that. Thanks for pointing that out and I plan on making an explanation as to why the boots worked in the coming chapter. Thank you for enjoying the fic though!
Not happy with the idea of Isaac being captured or Ellis. It's to predictable and boring. The idea of these ponies getting there hands on advanced technology is like giving modern-day weaponry to the Nazis during WWII. It would have made more sense if neither Isaac or Ellis had been captured. In my opinion at least.
388466 I understand your reasoning. It is pretty predictable, but I don't know if they will remain captured for much longer. Isaac does have a knack for getting out of situations like this, you know.
Ya and he very well know to kill everything and everyone that piss him off! Take Tiedemann for example, he constantly tried to kill Isaac in Dead Space 2. Especially in the Government Sector with those 200 guards/security personnel. Isaac kills all those guards by letting the necromorphs in. And then he later brutally kills Tiedemann. Let's not forget Isaac is no longer sane. He has a connection to the Markers now and he still sees things. Mainly Nicole or the people he's killed or have seen killed, like Kendra, Stross, Tiedemann, Hammond, Challus Mercer, Dr. Terrance Kyne and etc.
Also Isaac seems to be quite a pessimist, cynical and very damn sarcastic. He doesn't give a damn about authority anymore since no one can really be trusted. And he should be a quite a bit paranoid. There's also the fact he should see flashes of horror. Like in Dead Space 2 when Isaac sees things of horror when there is nothing there. He should have flashes of see Necromorphs ponies for brief moments. And that just ''jet' boots he has only work in zero gravity.
Chapter 2 is up! Hope you guys enjoy it! Please, let me know if you spot any mistakes with spelling or grammer!
Damn.
oh well can't wait till the next one.
Great! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Issac is Chuck Norris. From the future. That is how exactly freaking bad ass he is.
awesome is the only word I think of at present time to describe this chapter.
I cant wait to see celestia's reaction to his memorys
Oh Isac, please check your manliness at the door because you'll no longer be needing it.
<Nuclear Launch Detected>
Dropping in
3...
2...
1...
MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!
I can't shake the feeling of Necro's in the future, and I am ok with this. Looking forward to hilarity at the castle
Holy crap mang, moar, I want everyone to see him retract his helmet.
Isaac should have used deadly force.
Awesome chapter, I especially like how you did the first fight. One thing though : Isaac's jet boosters only work in zero-gravity, so him flying off like that wouldn't work. Then again, pegasi flying with those tiny wings wouldn't work either. Maybe put in a mention of Isaac noticing the gravity here to be a lot lighter than Earth and remembering that when he's running away and activates his jet boots. Or maybe have Isaac use the jet boots as a last-ditch effort , as he can't outrun the guards on foot, and is suprised when they work because magic.
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Oh yea.... Completely forgot about that. Thanks for pointing that out and I plan on making an explanation as to why the boots worked in the coming chapter. Thank you for enjoying the fic though!
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Not happy with the idea of Isaac being captured or Ellis. It's to predictable and boring. The idea of these ponies getting there hands on advanced technology is like giving modern-day weaponry to the Nazis during WWII. It would have made more sense if neither Isaac or Ellis had been captured. In my opinion at least.
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I understand your reasoning. It is pretty predictable, but I don't know if they will remain captured for much longer. Isaac does have a knack for getting out of situations like this, you know.
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And you shall recieve more later on today!
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Ya and he very well know to kill everything and everyone that piss him off! Take Tiedemann for example, he constantly tried to kill Isaac in Dead Space 2. Especially in the Government Sector with those 200 guards/security personnel. Isaac kills all those guards by letting the necromorphs in. And then he later brutally kills Tiedemann. Let's not forget Isaac is no longer sane. He has a connection to the Markers now and he still sees things. Mainly Nicole or the people he's killed or have seen killed, like Kendra, Stross, Tiedemann, Hammond, Challus Mercer, Dr. Terrance Kyne and etc.
Also Isaac seems to be quite a pessimist, cynical and very damn sarcastic. He doesn't give a damn about authority anymore since no one can really be trusted. And he should be a quite a bit paranoid. There's also the fact he should see flashes of horror. Like in Dead Space 2 when Isaac sees things of horror when there is nothing there. He should have flashes of see Necromorphs ponies for brief moments. And that just ''jet' boots he has only work in zero gravity.
Pony necromorphs...By the gods, that's a horrible thought.
I want Issac to kick more guard's asses.
holy fucking shit
THIS IS GOLD
hmmm do i dare look at the april fools chapter i have a feeling i will be disapoint
also don't kill any of the mane 6 i don't think my little heart could take that i will award you with 5 cookies if you dont kill any of the 6
1 thing: Celestia, your overreaction over EVERYTHING never seizes to amuse me.
This being a Dead Space fic, I want to accept Your wording of "objective at hand" as a pun.
WTF ELIE WTF!!