Twilight accepting an offer for immortality in exchange for the lives of her friends? WHAT? Her bond with Celestia might be strong, but no desire for power has ever been made evident in her canon personality, but you've pulled a lot of stuff from your head-canon anyway. With the real characters, this just would not happen- Twilight's friendships with even one or two of her close friends (the only one remaining being Applejack, if I count correctly) being strong enough to deflect such a temptation. Or, she's been subverted somehow, as Fletcher thinks. Either way, Celestia herself is acting pretty weird. Well, at least the story's off hiatus.
582499 I have the feeling that you are taking this a bit too seriously. This story, as I'm sure you have guessed by now, does not strictly follow the show's cannon. I just write down what I think would be good, even if it strays a smidgen from the cannon. I like that you are paying attention, though.
584390 I plead with my readers for critical analysis, so it'd be inappropriate to never provide it myself. A smidgen is a bit of an understatement, but I shall continue to follow, don't worry about the story's darker and edgier touch.
so how long till your next planned chapter? the story's been pretty good sofar and also i can somewhat see twi's reasoning for joining celestia on this.
588141 Well thanks to a Thespurgin, I have new determination to finish this fic. I should probably have the next chapter out within the week. Two weeks tops.
Twilight accepting an offer for immortality in exchange for the lives of her friends? WHAT? Her bond with Celestia might be strong, but no desire for power has ever been made evident in her canon personality, but you've pulled a lot of stuff from your head-canon anyway. With the real characters, this just would not happen- Twilight's friendships with even one or two of her close friends (the only one remaining being Applejack, if I count correctly) being strong enough to deflect such a temptation. Or, she's been subverted somehow, as Fletcher thinks. Either way, Celestia herself is acting pretty weird. Well, at least the story's off hiatus.
582499![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
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I have the feeling that you are taking this a bit too seriously.
This story, as I'm sure you have guessed by now, does not strictly follow the show's cannon. I just write down what I think would be good, even if it strays a smidgen from the cannon.
I like that you are paying attention, though.
584390 I plead with my readers for critical analysis, so it'd be inappropriate to never provide it myself. A smidgen is a bit of an understatement, but I shall continue to follow, don't worry about the story's darker and edgier touch.
celestias a wee bit off her kilter anyway luna killed spike? wtf? nvm just let me know how long has twi ben in on this plan?
587963![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
The whole time.
i cant believe i didn't get it from the beginning o and was it willing or was she mind controlled into it?
587982![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
All shall be revealed in good time, my friend.
588110 thats what i'm both hoping for and afraid of.
588113![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Then be hopeful and fearful.
so how long till your next planned chapter? the story's been pretty good sofar and also i can somewhat see twi's reasoning for joining celestia on this.
588141![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Well thanks to a Thespurgin, I have new determination to finish this fic. I should probably have the next chapter out within the week. Two weeks tops.
588155 woot
looking forward to it.