Usually I don't read romance. Usually I don't read dark. This is alright though, not sure why. The characters seem to be fading in and out of character on occasion. This might be because I find romance to be out of character in general, and I think 'Cupcakes' has somehow edited your head-canon; Pinkie Pie is one of the least violent and most optimistic ponies there is. Continue your writing.
Usually I don't read romance. Usually I don't read dark. This is alright though, not sure why. The characters seem to be fading in and out of character on occasion. This might be because I find romance to be out of character in general, and I think 'Cupcakes' has somehow edited your head-canon; Pinkie Pie is one of the least violent and most optimistic ponies there is. Continue your writing.
That... that was truly creepy. Dang it pinkie what kind of idiot do you have to be to go and eat an UNCOOKED leg?! At least cook it FIRST!