4245619 Not calling you stupid but, see that thing at the bottom? "On Hiatus"? Yeah? Well, I'm stopping this at one junction, so I can get off on another one. (Being a story with Artorias the Abysswalker)
In life there is stress In death there is release In life there is little rest In death your at peace In life there is pain In death you cannot feel In life you have a brain In death your stiff as steel In life you are trapped In death you are free In life your wrapped In death there is a key In life you take a breath In death your out of breath
please tell me what you think about it.(also don't be a dick about it.)
4247530 Ahhh I see, maybe an A, A, B, C, B pattern would've turned out better. Maybe. Actually just ignore me haha, got no idea what I'm talking about .
Still, it was a good try even if it didn't turn out so well in the end.
4245635 Sorry about that. When I see a new chapter in my email, I click on the link that leads directly to the story, meaning that I don't see the story page itself, so I don't see the page that says "On Hiatus". Therefore, I had no idea the story was put on hiatus to begin with. All that I recalled was that I haven't seen a new chapter in a while, and that I wanted to make my inquiry as to why. So, thank you for informing me that you have put the story on hiatus, and that you are working on a different story for the time being. Would you mind putting down a link so that I can see this other story?
After seeing him pop up here and there, even seeing him show up in the decidedly non-crossover "Son of Invention", I really want to see this story expanded on. Here's hoping.
Wow... Just... wow...
4245309 Did it shock you that bad? I didn't know... I'm sorry...
So sad
Great poem
I'm not afraid of pyramid head bring it on *please don't*
4245313 Sorry? For creating a poem like that? You must be whooping with joy!
Damn!!!!
Bring it Pyramid Head!!
Awesome poem!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Hm....
I like the minorly-spoilerish poem, however an actual chapter would have been much better... (hint hint)
4245619 Not calling you stupid but, see that thing at the bottom? "On Hiatus"? Yeah? Well, I'm stopping this at one junction, so I can get off on another one. (Being a story with Artorias the Abysswalker)
Epic
This is a poem I tried to write last November
In life there is stress
In death there is release
In life there is little rest
In death your at peace
In life there is pain
In death you cannot feel
In life you have a brain
In death your stiff as steel
In life you are trapped
In death you are free
In life your wrapped
In death there is a key
In life you take a breath
In death your out of breath
please tell me what you think about it.(also don't be a dick about it.)
4246334 That's very um....nice? Bit on the morbid side don'tcha think?
Erm....
How to put this....
I can see you tried a A, A, B, B rhyming scheme or something but it well...
Didn't turn out too good....
No offense....
4246334 Were ya feeling alright, Sounds alittle like you are asking for help, maybe I am just assuming it has a hidden meaning though.
4246919 I know, I actually threw myself off by going A, A, B, B, D, C
4247530
Ahhh I see, maybe an A, A, B, C, B pattern would've turned out better. Maybe. Actually just ignore me haha, got no idea what I'm talking about .
Still, it was a good try even if it didn't turn out so well in the end.
4247548 Aye, still got people to say it was amazing though.
4247552
True enough. In this case though it's probably the content pulling the poem, so content wise (insert Asian speaking English) good job!
Um....Okay?
4246930 to tell you the truth I was messing around
4245635
Sorry about that. When I see a new chapter in my email, I click on the link that leads directly to the story, meaning that I don't see the story page itself, so I don't see the page that says "On Hiatus". Therefore, I had no idea the story was put on hiatus to begin with. All that I recalled was that I haven't seen a new chapter in a while, and that I wanted to make my inquiry as to why. So, thank you for informing me that you have put the story on hiatus, and that you are working on a different story for the time being. Would you mind putting down a link so that I can see this other story?
4254233 Abyssal Redemption
DUDE, that was f*cking AWESOME!
why do i fell like this foreshadowing for the end
After seeing him pop up here and there, even seeing him show up in the decidedly non-crossover "Son of Invention", I really want to see this story expanded on. Here's hoping.
That sounds like a prophecy if I've ever heard one.
Damn it, I want to be able to make prophecys as badass as this one.