I'll admit, I read this expecting mostly mindless clop with some story. What I got? One of the most adorable romances I've ever read, with some maturity thrown in. This sir, got more than a few D'awws out of me, and was just plain bloody cute. Bravo.
D'aww that was sweet
Hang on, when did YOU get here?! I thought it was about ME!
Er...wait...I mean I'm the one who's with Twilight not you...or would that mean you're with Twilight and I'm not?
Bah! Point is, you dun goofed up this sentence!
I think you mean little yush? Not iittle.
Besides the minor errors, nice chapter.
5550595 here here.
5550695 Curse my blindness [I'm not really blind].
Thank you for pointing that out. Fixing now. :D
Sequel with foals is now demanded
5551299 I've been thinking about that, actually. I'm considering it.
Also, I'm glad you enjoy the story!
And then spike walks in says"nope" walks back out
5589098 He's busy with Rarity. Though, it can happen.
That was... beautiful.
5601050 You found one of them! Can you find the others?
Cool story bro. now, *grabs author* TO NARNIA! (XD)
This story is so god damn cute!
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5680044 Thank you! Make sure to share it with your friends and followers! It would mean a lot to me!
5680162 OMG LOL!
I only skimed it and there was way too much detail
5699218 That was the plan, sir/madam/both...?
I'll admit, I read this expecting mostly mindless clop with some story. What I got? One of the most adorable romances I've ever read, with some maturity thrown in. This sir, got more than a few D'awws out of me, and was just plain bloody cute. Bravo.
The amount of doctor who references in chapters 1 & 2 is astoundingly BRILLIANT
6053624 um dude, I didn't see a single reference. And I should know if there were any.
I had thought this story was good enough to leave a like.
And so I did.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story not for the plot but also the fact that there was hardly any grammatical errors!! Loved it