Tis a good story and all, kinda had me giggling like a little girl from her reactions! But this error caught my attention.
Otherwise, you'd have ponies circling your house, fearing she was being attacked.
I don't remember us going back to our house with her in tow. I do remember going inside her home and never exiting it...unless she teleported us and I forgot?
There might've been another that I forgot about. Trying to rush read this and then finish my story's last chapter with only 9% charge left on my tablet during my free time.
5544335 I'm currently working on the next chapter to the story. I took a bit of a break, but if I continue throughout the day, you can expect this chapter to be up by tonight.
Absolutely wonderful can't wait for more
And you did. Masterfully I might add. Bravo.
Very sexy, a great New Year gift.
That was great well done.
There seems to be a missing word from this sentence.
5455799 Fixed.
Tis a good story and all, kinda had me giggling like a little girl from her reactions! But this error caught my attention.
I don't remember us going back to our house with her in tow. I do remember going inside her home and never exiting it...unless she teleported us and I forgot?
There might've been another that I forgot about. Trying to rush read this and then finish my story's last chapter with only 9% charge left on my tablet during my free time.
5479995 Fixed.
Thank you for pointing that out. I'm glad you enjoy the story.
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Mhmm, wonder what shall happen next~
5544335 I'm currently working on the next chapter to the story. I took a bit of a break, but if I continue throughout the day, you can expect this chapter to be up by tonight.
Niiiiiiiiiice...