Chapter 2: Fluttershy
]Later afternoon fluttershy came to rarity's boutiqe and went to to look for rarity inside and she was there .
"Hello rarity im here" said fluttershy.
"so glad you made it darling now take a seat while i get the dresses , okay ?!" said rarity.
"okay just hurry,"said fluttershy. But she only said that because she was very afraid about being alone, by herself.
Then rarity later returned with a pile of dresses and she said",now go put on those dresses i got for you, and when you finish changing come and tell me so that I can see you wearing them ."
"okay..." fluttershy squeeked
Some minutes later fluttershy came out wearing an exraordanary gown dazzeled with only the finest saphire rubies and dimonds fit for a princess , it also came with glass slippers made for a pony , oviously. It also had a pretty small crafted butterfly clip for her main /hair , the gown was the color of sky blue and it was also very glittery and it sparkled in the light .
"wow fluttershy you look absoluely dazzeling in that gown !" said raity
Fluttershy started to blush a light shade of pink
"now you can take it off so that I can put them away in a box to send to canterlot for my new collection of fancy dresses !" said rarity.
2 hours later fluttershy still had 15 more dresses to wear but rarity didnt let her leave so she modeled all the other dresses and that took for about another 3 and a half hours then the worst part came ...
"fluttershy darling can you also come tomorrow for the canterlot royal desingers too see you in those gowns ?" said rarity . " well rarity i dont know if i can i have to take care of all of my animals and that takes almost a whole day ..." said fluttershy . " to bad fluttershy because this is more importaint than al those animals dont you care about me ?!" said rarity . "but-" " No butts fluttershy tommorow and that is final !!" said raity "okayy..." fluttershy said . Reveiw and leave comments if you like this story please help me ancomment up or down :) !!!!!!! Thank you and see you next time
how can there be a sapphire ruby? they are two different gems for crying out loud!
This wasn't as bad as the thumbs down suggests, but there is something that strikes me as strange. Rarity, while being self absorbed and needy, isn't somepony that I can see telling somepony that something they love is not as important as her own passion, but it's your story. Gonna see where the next part leads.