Holy crap this is amazing! The writing, the detail, the description, THE GORE. It's all amazing! I freakin loved the dream scene! And the description and awesome metaphors and comparisons are amazing! Again it's only minor spelling errors from time to time. Why do I get the feeling Pinkie is gonna make Fluttershy torture Twilight? You sir/ma'am, are an amazing author. Keep. It. Up.
And again gushing here, the ending with all the suspense and amazing-ness of the writing of guessing who the strange new game player was was the coolest thing ever. Keep up the amazing writing.
Anyway, this story is... well, I've read it about eight hundred times before in various formats, so it's nothing new. Edgy attempts to be dark with over the top, unrealistic torture gore and out of character performances by our heroes, old meme references, etc. It's like the world's blandest 80s slasher b-movie that also takes itself painfully seriously and thinks it's the edgiest thing of the entire 90s decade.
It always surprises me when I hear people liking Cupcakes. it's the equivalent of liking the kid at a party that runs around screaming for attention and is generally being a little cunt. Making a fan spin off is like watching that kid and going "Fuck, that kid is great. I'm gonna be just like him.'
Be original, make a spin off with Cupcakes, MLD and Rainbow Factory, all mashed together. And voilĂ , you got something edgy and dark as hell and the support of these three fandom, instead of this poor unimaginative spin off.
EDIT : You call it " My little cupcakes factory " and you're golden.
3805895 I know its not that original and there's probably a hundred more fan-made sequels. I never write to get followers or fame. I write because I just damn well felt like it.
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Holy crap this is amazing! The writing, the detail, the description, THE GORE. It's all amazing! I freakin loved the dream scene! And the description and awesome metaphors and comparisons are amazing! Again it's only minor spelling errors from time to time. Why do I get the feeling Pinkie is gonna make Fluttershy torture Twilight? You sir/ma'am, are an amazing author. Keep. It. Up.
And again gushing here, the ending with all the suspense and amazing-ness of the writing of guessing who the strange new game player was was the coolest thing ever. Keep up the amazing writing.
Here, I improved your description:
Now it's at least honest.
3805575 Also, obvious alt is obvious.
Sometimes, I like to hide razor blades in my anus.
3805575
You are as energizing as a peer pressure presentation from DARE at an elementary school that includes Snoop Dogg.
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I think I like you.
Anyway, this story is... well, I've read it about eight hundred times before in various formats, so it's nothing new. Edgy attempts to be dark with over the top, unrealistic torture gore and out of character performances by our heroes, old meme references, etc. It's like the world's blandest 80s slasher b-movie that also takes itself painfully seriously and thinks it's the edgiest thing of the entire 90s decade.
3805636 And I you. We hang out with a lot of the same folk, from what I know.
3805638
3805636 go suck each other's dicks elsewhere
3805668
plz fellate a walrus and choke on it and die
also your avatar ruined a perfectly good album cover
3805670 fellating a walrus only makes it stronger
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but you'll die and that's what matters
3805680 this is true
It always surprises me when I hear people liking Cupcakes.
it's the equivalent of liking the kid at a party that runs around screaming for attention and is generally being a little cunt.
Making a fan spin off is like watching that kid and going "Fuck, that kid is great. I'm gonna be just like him.'
Be original, make a spin off with Cupcakes, MLD and Rainbow Factory, all mashed together. And voilĂ , you got something edgy and dark as hell and the support of these three fandom, instead of this poor unimaginative spin off.
EDIT : You call it " My little cupcakes factory " and you're golden.
What's with all the downvotes?
Wasn't this posted before and it got the same reaction as now?
3806699 It was.... then I got bored at 0100 in the morining
3805895 I know its not that original and there's probably a hundred more fan-made sequels. I never write to get followers or fame. I write because I just damn well felt like it.
3805575 you give me the impression that your multiple comments are sarcastic...
I can't read this
This is my kind of story