Awwwww yeah! A sequel to one of my favorite fanfics ever, but with the rest of the Mane 6? This is gonna be gooood!
*Ahem* So aside from a few spelling errors here and there, I think it's looking really good. I like the way you wrote everybody, and in my opinion, I think you captured everyponys' charaters pretty good. I can't wait to get to the murder part, especially when it's Fluttershy's turn. Keep up th geat work :P.
Awwwww yeah! A sequel to one of my favorite fanfics ever, but with the rest of the Mane 6? This is gonna be gooood!
*Ahem* So aside from a few spelling errors here and there, I think it's looking really good. I like the way you wrote everybody, and in my opinion, I think you captured everyponys' charaters pretty good. I can't wait to get to the murder part, especially when it's Fluttershy's turn. Keep up th geat work :P.
Oh and I just realized that you misspelled "prologue" at the very beginning :P.