Will what do you do in a broken world now? When everything have gone to hill and never government what so ever to speak of? You fight that's what, you look after yourself and around and one thing is left to do everything is gone.... survive.
3832149 It may be real, but it would be very out of place in the US, especially post-apocalyptic. As in, I've never seen or heard a name like that.
The intro wasn't bad, though your timeline is a bit too near-future. There were a number of grammar problems that lead me to believe English is your second language.
Then I got to chapter one and shed a tear for the state of literature in our world today- it's in first person. This had similar grammar issues and odd word choices, but was otherwise readable. The detail gone into with the weapons is excessive, and highly improbable. For example, the M4A1 is actually a very rare weapon that is usually the result of putting an M16A1 lower receiver on an M4 carbine, and with weapon laws in place, that means it's extremely unlikely to show up. Then there's how far this takes place in the future, with the entire AR series looking to be replaced in the next few years, any M4s will be very old weapons, combined with their unreliable systems, they would be better for decorations than weapons. Then of course, there's the AKs, which would actually survive, but would be the civilian models only.
So, currently, I'm not seeing much going for this fic other than it being set in post-apocalyptia, and that went away fast in a very ridiculous way. Sorry to say, but I don't have very high hopes for this being anything besides another "died and went to Equestria, let's go bang the mane 6 and be OP" fic. I hope I'm wrong.
3832208 and yes you be very wrond on the bring the mane sex, i mean my god if your into that there's about 6k on this site alone, am going for something more orgilne on this site than that really
Also in the Wasteland there are no more weapon laws and now people that have skills to make weapons full atuo can now with out any papre work.
Also Remeber alot of people died in the war so people are going to loot and find things, Also really it's not that hard to find a full auto AK weapon if you know where to look
3832228 That'd mean looting down into Mexico, where people will be using those weapons to keep their weapons...
If people can make weapons, they sure won't be making AR platform weapons. There isn't any good reason to make a weapon that's only good for the target range, and jams when it's needed. To produce ARs, you'd have to have a full modern manufacturing shop with advanced machine tools and plastic molding. To produce AKs, you just need a rusty shovel.
3832246 There making there own line of weapons heres one AR made out of metal and the the back gaord of it
I do not own them but it give you an idea what weapons am talking about
Carolina M16M2 Assault Rifle fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/256/0/c/carolina_m16m2_assault_rifle_by_tylero79-d6m4qas.jpg Essentially an M16 modified by replacing the plastic parts with wood and metal, the M16M2 is the standard issue service rifle for the Coastal Republic and the Inland Republic. Most of the M16M2's used by the two Carolina nations are chambered for the .223 Carolina, a 7.62x39mm AK round necked down to the 5.56x45mm NATO round. The .223 Carolina round was introduced due to requests for a higher powered round that could also be used with 5.56mm caliber barrels. Many M16M2's are used by the CR and IR, but shortages are common, and many units are equipped with old M16's and M4's along with locally built AK's and Wastelands Assault Rifles. Many copies in the .223 Carolina round have been produced by the Delmarva Republic for use in its war with the Northeast Empire. The Ohio Consortium also produces a great deal of M16M2's, but does not officially use them. The Consortium instead trades them for supplies and for the Coastal Republic in exchange for support from the Coastal Special Forces in its war with the Northeast Empire. Due to the .223 Carolina's size, a typical M16 STAGNAG mag can hold 24 rounds.
The most common weapon for the comman man is this weapon right here
Wasteland Assault Rifle fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/232/6/4/wasteland_assault_rifle_by_tylero79-d6j1qdk.jpg A cheap and simple weapon created out of scrap and salvaged parts. Created in the rather isolated Carolina Wastes, the assault rifle has spread throughout the wastelands. Chambered for either the 7.62x39mm rounds of the AK-47, or the more common 5.56x45mm NATO of the M-16 and M-4, along with any other rounds the user choices to chamber it in. The assault rifle was not made to be a quality weapon, it was made to be easy to make and arm whole settlements quickly by unskilled gunsmiths. As such, the quality and durability can vary greatly from weapon to weapon.
3832264 It may have wood, but it's still an overcomplicated, hard to build firearm that wasn't meant for combat. I cannot see them being used in the wastes :/
I think you spilled a bucket of vowels on those k's, might wanna take a wet cloth to it or something before it dries.
3832119 Ikaika is a real name and how it should be say in english.
But how you liking the fic and tell what you think of it so far?
3832149
It may be real, but it would be very out of place in the US, especially post-apocalyptic.
As in, I've never seen or heard a name like that.
The intro wasn't bad, though your timeline is a bit too near-future. There were a number of grammar problems that lead me to believe English is your second language.
Then I got to chapter one and shed a tear for the state of literature in our world today- it's in first person. This had similar grammar issues and odd word choices, but was otherwise readable.
The detail gone into with the weapons is excessive, and highly improbable. For example, the M4A1 is actually a very rare weapon that is usually the result of putting an M16A1 lower receiver on an M4 carbine, and with weapon laws in place, that means it's extremely unlikely to show up. Then there's how far this takes place in the future, with the entire AR series looking to be replaced in the next few years, any M4s will be very old weapons, combined with their unreliable systems, they would be better for decorations than weapons.
Then of course, there's the AKs, which would actually survive, but would be the civilian models only.
So, currently, I'm not seeing much going for this fic other than it being set in post-apocalyptia, and that went away fast in a very ridiculous way. Sorry to say, but I don't have very high hopes for this being anything besides another "died and went to Equestria, let's go bang the mane 6 and be OP" fic. I hope I'm wrong.
3832208 and yes you be very wrond on the bring the mane sex, i mean my god if your into that there's about 6k on this site alone, am going for something more orgilne on this site than that really
Also in the Wasteland there are no more weapon laws and now people that have skills to make weapons full atuo can now with out any papre work.
His in this kind of wasteland heres the map of it
th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2013/287/9/8/wasteland_map_by_tylero79-d6e1yqh.png
Also Remeber alot of people died in the war so people are going to loot and find things, Also really it's not that hard to find a full auto AK weapon if you know where to look
3832228
That'd mean looting down into Mexico, where people will be using those weapons to keep their weapons...
If people can make weapons, they sure won't be making AR platform weapons. There isn't any good reason to make a weapon that's only good for the target range, and jams when it's needed. To produce ARs, you'd have to have a full modern manufacturing shop with advanced machine tools and plastic molding.
To produce AKs, you just need a rusty shovel.
3832246 There making there own line of weapons heres one AR made out of metal and the the back gaord of it
I do not own them but it give you an idea what weapons am talking about
Carolina M16M2 Assault Rifle
fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/256/0/c/carolina_m16m2_assault_rifle_by_tylero79-d6m4qas.jpg
Essentially an M16 modified by replacing the plastic parts with wood and metal, the M16M2 is the standard issue service rifle for the Coastal Republic and the Inland Republic. Most of the M16M2's used by the two Carolina nations are chambered for the .223 Carolina, a 7.62x39mm AK round necked down to the 5.56x45mm NATO round. The .223 Carolina round was introduced due to requests for a higher powered round that could also be used with 5.56mm caliber barrels. Many M16M2's are used by the CR and IR, but shortages are common, and many units are equipped with old M16's and M4's along with locally built AK's and Wastelands Assault Rifles. Many copies in the .223 Carolina round have been produced by the Delmarva Republic for use in its war with the Northeast Empire. The Ohio Consortium also produces a great deal of M16M2's, but does not officially use them. The Consortium instead trades them for supplies and for the Coastal Republic in exchange for support from the Coastal Special Forces in its war with the Northeast Empire. Due to the .223 Carolina's size, a typical M16 STAGNAG mag can hold 24 rounds.
The most common weapon for the comman man is this weapon right here
Wasteland Assault Rifle
fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/232/6/4/wasteland_assault_rifle_by_tylero79-d6j1qdk.jpg
A cheap and simple weapon created out of scrap and salvaged parts. Created in the rather isolated Carolina Wastes, the assault rifle has spread throughout the wastelands. Chambered for either the 7.62x39mm rounds of the AK-47, or the more common 5.56x45mm NATO of the M-16 and M-4, along with any other rounds the user choices to chamber it in. The assault rifle was not made to be a quality weapon, it was made to be easy to make and arm whole settlements quickly by unskilled gunsmiths. As such, the quality and durability can vary greatly from weapon to weapon.
3832246 Also come back next mothe or 2 or 1 week and i get the ch 2 ready and up
3832264
It may have wood, but it's still an overcomplicated, hard to build firearm that wasn't meant for combat. I cannot see them being used in the wastes :/
3832282 try telling Old US army man they was that weapon and are the very few that are making for them.
Like i say weapons in the waste is have no more laws for all we know one guy have made one weapon where it fire full auto with a belt feeder 12 ga LMG