376858 I wanted to add Vinyl so badly because this was the perfect chapter to add her, but unfortunatley due to complications of story conflictions between me and my fellow collab writers I wasn't able to.
Am I the only one that gets 'abusive boyfriend' vibes off of Felix? I mean, in only five (rather short) chapters, he's been pushing her around, calling her a bitch, getting into erotic situations with her... I dunno, he just doesn't seem like the kind of person I'd like to be stuck with if I was Octavia...
another good chapter but one thing that annoys me (damn, my obsession with music get annoying sometimes) is that cello strings for professional classical music are almost always gut or nylon strings, not steel. but thats just me being straight nit picky.
A couple errors you can fix: "then keeping going" should just be "then keep going". "seizure educing" might want to be changed to "seizure inducing". I've heard it both ways, but inducing sounds more natural. "shinning" should be "shining". "touch my there" should be "touch me there".
Loving the story, Sexy, - can I call you Sexy? - but this is the second time I've had to point out some spelling or grammar errors. Perhaps you should send me new chapters before you post them, so I can proofread them and avoid having to call them out in the comments.
380304 Sexy is fine, Frog works too. Either or. Also I just might take you up on that. I try to proof read as best I can by myself but some things do slip through the net, ya know?
I love your use of music to set the mood of the chapter bravo to you. I think you've earned 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I think I didn't say it clear enough. He didn't check the pulse. So reviving somebody who is only unconscious, but can breath on his on, is completely unnecessary. *Sweet, a scout*
This is getting interesting, and I have to agree, dubstep is pretty annoying. I'd only go if I had an MP3 player with Hypnotize on it and they served Irish car bombs
Well that was marvelous. Octavia is my favorite character, and I seriously think you did an amazing job with her. Although I hope that we still get some action with her after this XD. Anyways, just wanted to let you know I'm loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter!
405440 Does this mean your fic hasn't been removed from the collab? I saw that it said yours was out on the main page, or is this just a mistake? I really hope you don't have to stop, Tavi is definitely a popular fanon persona so their statement regarding less popular background characters shouldn't count against you...
406065 Well, with a heavy heart I must report that I have been removed from the collab. But you know what? I'm a big boy and I think I'll live. But I'm on the wait list to maybe get back in, so I have to wait a week. I will be working on the next chapter as planned but an update is going to be a little late.
All we need now is Vinyl FTW!
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BROTHER
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Damn it Jin not now!
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*sigh* Let's...have some more fun, Ragna!
376858 I wanted to add Vinyl so badly because this was the perfect chapter to add her, but unfortunatley due to complications of story conflictions between me and my fellow collab writers I wasn't able to.
To qoute vader: NNNNOOOOOOO!!
Wait... so... is she bi or lesbian? From what just happened and past events, I really can't give a heads or tails on the conflicting matter.
Am I the only one that gets 'abusive boyfriend' vibes off of Felix? I mean, in only five (rather short) chapters, he's been pushing her around, calling her a bitch, getting into erotic situations with her... I dunno, he just doesn't seem like the kind of person I'd like to be stuck with if I was Octavia...
another good chapter but one thing that annoys me (damn, my obsession with music get annoying sometimes) is that cello strings for professional classical music are almost always gut or nylon strings, not steel. but thats just me being straight nit picky.
377293 Soon to be explained.
377633 Your opinion may change in the next coming chapter.
377653 Fixed. Thanks for the correction!
Y U NO UPDATE AGAIN?
A couple errors you can fix: "then keeping going" should just be "then keep going". "seizure educing" might want to be changed to "seizure inducing". I've heard it both ways, but inducing sounds more natural. "shinning" should be "shining". "touch my there" should be "touch me there".
Loving the story, Sexy, - can I call you Sexy? - but this is the second time I've had to point out some spelling or grammar errors. Perhaps you should send me new chapters before you post them, so I can proofread them and avoid having to call them out in the comments.
... me gusta
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no amount of me gusta pics will ever comprehend what i feel right now
You preserved the pairing!
380304 Sexy is fine, Frog works too. Either or. Also I just might take you up on that. I try to proof read as best I can by myself but some things do slip through the net, ya know?
oh dear...
Commence the shit storm.
“Do you understand me? Never again! Do. You. Comprehend?!”
The only thing I thought of when I read this wasimages.sodahead.com/polls/001583837/3749645566_DoYouSpeakEnglish_answer_4_xlarge.gif
380766 I'd never dream of breaking it!
382868 Oh my gosh, yes!
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BONER AT THE PIC.
dat pic
if i lold any harder the hole dam city would blow up
382868
That line was actually used in another of the collab fics.
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It is mine you are referencing to
This was the inspiration for that scene
I am guessing you are talking about the Rarity one?
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Yup, seeing that one featured led me to the rest of them. So...thank you?
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You are welcome!
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396561 That picture gets more and more disturbing every time I see it....
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How about this one?
My mind... Is blown.
I love your use of music to set the mood of the chapter bravo to you. 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I hope this is as bad as Ponyfall fics get, because if there's a level lower than this, we're going to hit a fuel line.
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I think I didn't say it clear enough. He didn't check the pulse. So reviving somebody who is only unconscious, but can breath on his on, is completely unnecessary.
*Sweet, a scout*
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Either way good story!
This is getting interesting, and I have to agree, dubstep is pretty annoying.
I'd only go if I had an MP3 player with Hypnotize on it and they served Irish car bombs
401869 Not sure if compliment, or insult. i.qkme.me/3ddg.jpg
399443 Might wanna have that checked out.
400918 Thank ye kindly.
402924 Small hole in the story I suppose.
402924 Star Scout mutha fucka!
404189 It's all fixed now. But I eagerly await the moment when you blow it again.
404189 ...I...the...I...what...
*sigh* Yes, it was totally a compliment.
Reviewed your story: WHATEVER, IT'S 2009!!
Well that was marvelous. Octavia is my favorite character, and I seriously think you did an amazing job with her. Although I hope that we still get some action with her after this XD. Anyways, just wanted to let you know I'm loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Getting awfully close to an M rating...
405430 It'll be toned down in the next chapter due to obligations.
404497 Sorry, I'm a little slow in the wee hours of the night. Thanks though.
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Does this mean your fic hasn't been removed from the collab? I saw that it said yours was out on the main page, or is this just a mistake? I really hope you don't have to stop, Tavi is definitely a popular fanon persona so their statement regarding less popular background characters shouldn't count against you...
Me like some of it, me don't like some of it, me...... Gusta.
406065 Well, with a heavy heart I must report that I have been removed from the collab. But you know what? I'm a big boy and I think I'll live.
But I'm on the wait list to maybe get back in, so I have to wait a week. I will be working on the next chapter as planned but an update is going to be a little late.
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Maybe is better than nothing I suppose.
dat cello