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Sexy Frog


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not really going to read this
i do nothing

Nice start man! defiantly tracking this ^^

Wow, I hardly expected it to get so many views so fast. Thanks a lot. I am so going to keep it comming. :rainbowkiss:

328329 you should expect everything brother/sister/whatever it is that you are
and I dont see why it would get many views this is friggin funny

A good start, nice music choice, and it's always nice to see Octavia. I've always liked human Octavia.

Now, a few corrections. "Ditsy Doo" should be "Ditzy Doo", "Doctor Hooves" should be "Doctor Whooves", and "starred" should be "stared". How does one star at a wall, anyway?

So far so good Sexy Frog

(Your the first one done with posting your collab fic)

-Silverness

(Also its Ditzy Doo and Doctor Whooves, also you forgot to add the date *Draequine told me to tell you*)

*Slow building clap* And so, the first stone falls into place. *End dramatic comment* Nice job bro, and it gave me a few ideas for my Fic. Can't wait to see the rest.

before: well why not read it

after:.....i'm tracking it

328481 What do you mean I forgot to add the date?

328699 I guess add it to the top in the beginning, "April 13, 2012" and then your story starts

O.o I didn't even leave that big a cliffhanger-esque ending. Well played.

There is one thing that is contradictory still

the 13th of April is a Friday, not a Saturday.

I should know, I have my day off then from work due to my birthday two days prior.

Other than that, congrats of getting the first chapter of this mess out. Tracking and seeing where this is going.

At that point i would have fainted.

"Who was she? Where did she come from? Can I bang her?"

Ok I admit I cracked up pretty hard there. Also I can't believe a pre-med is having trouble getting laid. It's usually the engineers who end up 40 year old virgins :rainbowlaugh:

hehehehe
this is funny
I dunno what to say
I like it, a LOT!

Holy shit, Octavia being teleported here and transformed into a human?
:duck:

Please please please put new paragraphs when the speaker changes it's tough to decipher whats going on at times.

before: ~YAY~ new chap

after: 330755 well i would faint at that point too

Avast Octavia's Plot? And Felix gets a nice view of Octavia's butt. I see what you did there.

This guy is the most clueless brony I've ever seen. A dark-haired woman named Octavia, with a purple treble clef mark on her rump, who calls herself a pony and name drops Celestia and Canterlot? And he claims Octavia is his favorite?

"Can I bang her?"

THAT'S MAH BOY! Heh, no but seriously that was gold.

:twilightangry2: I can't believe you had the gall to post before me.

*Reads it* :rainbowderp:

Damn it... I can't stay mad at you!:pinkiesad2:

Keep up the good work :P

333984 I thought the music choice was pretty clever. :3

336502 Thank you kind sir. Can't wait to see yours! :pinkiehappy:

Im usually not into clopfics or humanized, but man I think i need to turn up the AC now.

IF THAT HAPPENED TO ME, DORM INSPECTION, I WOULD BE SO PISSED. :flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2:

You're pretty good at these. You could do a series if you wanted, of all the background characters or even the mane six in a situation like this. :pinkiehappy:

Taking advantage of emotionally vulnerable women huh? :rainbowhuh:

Oddly enough sounds like a lot of the pre-med/med students I knew.

338529 technically, its not really his series (he's a collab writer). Here's to clear up some things. Sexy Frog is one of twenty two writers on the collaboration, Ponyfall, which was created by Draequine (the series creator). Draequine is still currently working on his fic for Ponyfall while mostly all of us are and Frog posted his early.

So, this is what I'm really trying to say.
-Draequine is the series creator and this was really his idea (he just hasn't finished up with his fic, Frog finished early on his fic)
-All twenty two of us got one or two ponies to work on (I got Rainbow Dash)
-There are still more ponies that need to be done, but its not my say (its Draequine's)
-Link to Ponyfall group is here: http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=405

Oh yea Frog, nice job on the chapters, keep up the good work (just try not to bundle up two people talking in one paragraph)

opens the door, shoots the bitch with a blank face, closes door
would you like to continue Y/N
...Y

oh dear lord he's screwed.
But at least he's become a true man.

This... doesn't really make sense. So your self-insert takes advantage of Octavia's sad and devastating situation, and she just goes along with it?

...That really doesn't make sense.

346001 She's not in a right state of mind. She's a bit displaced if you would therefore she's emotionally vulnerable and in need of comfort. This just happens to be what Felix turns it into.

WELCOME TO PONYFALL EVERYPONY. THE JOURNEY HAS ONLY JUST BEGUN. THESE AUTHORS WILL LEAD US ON QUITE A RIDE AS THE SAGA GOES ON. THIS IS ONLY JUST THE BEGINNING.

DENIED!!!!:flutterrage:
Oh that was to funny. The win is strong with this one. My favorite part was Penis evolving into Boner.

349925 Thanks! I thought I'd throw in a little Pokemon refrence there :raritywink: . Also, I like your profile avatar! :ajsmug:

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