A single event opens the eyes of Twilight to something she had, for so long, denied. The depth of the love she discovers will forever change what she values and will lead her on the first steps of a journey that will affect the future of Equestria.
Page generated in 0.02 seconds
Total duration
704 users online
791,735 hits today, 2,364,530 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
YYYYYYEEEESSSSS!!!!!!
Twelve chapters for those three words.... but the pacing, and the hesitancy that Twilight had was more than enough to make up for the wait.
I guess the only questions now are, where do they go, and will Applejack get her memory back?
Can't wait for the next update on this, that's for sure!!
4070611
You just made the fact that I lost 4 years worth of data in a drive crash seem not as bad. Thanks for the pick me up.
Nothing from the story was lost. It's all safely backed up and encrypted online and in a flash drive.
Thanks!
4070746
Right? close to 50K words for that?
But hey, they're really great words.
Well that about wraps it up...:::
Not even close.
There is much story left - this is just a major turning point.
Tomorrow or the next day I'll be posting the infamous 13th chapter. It picks up moment's after the end of the 12th. I hope the fact that it moves to mature isn't going to be a problem...
I guess we'll see...
4070890 your quite welcome! anything to help someone who's feeling down!
I am so happy that we are finally at this point, the wait was well worth it!
I love this Story, and I hope you know that! I can not wait for more of this amazing story!
At this point no matter what you choose to do with this story, ill be along for the ride!
I fear I could explode from the excitement/happiness I get from this!
4070934 Never said they weren't great words.
Now, I wonder... what's next? And what's gonna happen when AJ gets her memory back??
4073952
I know, and I know you wouldn't. If only more people said those 3 words, the world would be like... Ponyville.
Regarding your last question-
It's a very long answer.
Ready for chapter 13? Give me about 20 minutes...
4073986 You kidding? Thirteen's my lucky number.
Lay it on me.
I imagined more awkwardness between Applejack and the other Apples. Also, I didn't like you putting everything from "Pinkie Apple Pie" to "Twilight Time" in there. Especially "Twilight Time." Trying to ret-con "Twilight Time" was the biggest mistake in this chapter, content-wise.
The other thing that I'm having trouble grasping is placement of ponies during the story. All of them visiting AJ confuses me. They're upstairs, downstairs, main room, kitchen with no notice of movement, or irregularities in movement.
Why in hell would the doctor not to talk with Applejack in the room about her condition? Is she a foal?
Last thing:
All those colors fluctuating + Applejack's condition = Seizure!!
I hate to say it, but this chapter is full of errors. Cute ending, but the rest of it?