A single event opens the eyes of Twilight to something she had, for so long, denied. The depth of the love she discovers will forever change what she values and will lead her on the first steps of a journey that will affect the future of Equestria.
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There is one more chapter after this and then the 13th chapter moves this to Mature. Look, I've already finished that chapter and the love scene is absolutely necessary. The nature of the love scene speaks volumes about the relationship between the two characters, and if you'll follow I think you'll find it worth your while.
Yes it's explicit sex, okay, not too explicit. Okay, a little explicit. Actually it's that all the necessary body parts are mentioned, but it's good. And it's funny. And you'll be the judge of that, I know, you're right and I should just shut up and let you decide. (but it is funny, and sweet and cute...and hot )
Not in the "Wow, that's hot sex" but in the "Wow, that really seems like what would happen with these two characters when they make love.for the first time" )
(Shut up Dash.)
The 12th chapter is almost done. If you're following this, again, thank you. I promise, everything will tie up. I was driving last night thinking about this and all of a sudden a character said a single line in my head and I freaked and the story exploded . (Not literally Pinkie) An entire story could be written on it but I'm going to add it to this and it fits like a dovetail and it delves into a theme I've already established and I can't believe that my Twilight and Applejack (and yes you too Dashie) (my muses,) gave it to me. It's going to add about 4 chapters.
So now I'm looking at about 35...
35?!
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Just keep it up, man! This is some damn good fiction, and I don't want it to end too soon.
Took me a while to get to chapter seven with all the emotion in it, but I'm glad that you haven't given up yet!!
Five outta five from me!
i'm very interested to see where that whole thing with thorn goes. maybe AJ will get jealous? that'd make for an interesting development!
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I suck at thank you's. I really appreciate your kind words. I'm trying to think of what I'd like to hear back from I writer I liked. It's harder than I thought. I will try to keep up the quality,
Thanks!! And don't worry . This isn't ending anytime soon...
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Thanks!!
Thorn will figure tremendously down the road. Just remember I said that.
I don't know if you read the long post I put up a few hours ago, but it was Thorn that spoke the line in my mind that made the future of this piece explode.
She is my first OC and she is awesome.
It's true, these characters suddenly appear. I mean I thought I had this story mapped out and then she shows up. I wish I could take credit for this, but I feel them just enter my head,
Would you like to see what she looks like? Well here is her twin sister Firefly:
http://equestria-prevails.deviantart.com/art/Firefly-351657539
Thorn is the dark half of this coin...
(I love you Equestria Prevails)
4009933 hey, she looks pretty awesome! and i know what you mean! i write stories for my own entertainment, and i'll have it all planned out, then i just get a new character in my head i just have to add in!
I love this story so much!
I know it was just last month that you updated this but it feels like forever!
Pleas keep up this amazing work, and as always I cant wait for the next chapter!
Bravo sir for such a wonderful story!