J Dog and Stardust. Close and unbreakable friends. They stick together through everything. Even if they are complete opposites they won’t abandon one another. Now itâ€
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I thought Angel was a guy. S/he seems too rude and too much of a jackass to be female, at least by cartoon logic
This story is hurt by the rapid changes of perspective that break up the flow in a bad way. Use of third person would have been wiser, kept flow constant and I don't see what is being gained from 1st person anyway.
Riddle me this... in what way was this character intended to be at all sympathetic? Because I saw this and noped right the fuck out of here. That's not a protagonist I can root for, because he's already so far over the Moral Event Horizon he just whizzed past Hitler into the oblivion of 'irredeemable monster'. That's a rabid dog that needs to be put down ASAP. Werewolves are already a really thinly veiled rape allegory, but this takes the cake. I'd say both of them come across as sexual predators, though, and I mean that in the 'why don't you have a seat over here' sense.
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Everything that amiamera said basically. There was no need for so many changes in perspective like that.
Hmmm... I have mixed feelings about this ends up.
Also... I could eat thirty serving of Lasagna now!
Mmm Lasagna
Angel is male indo not have visual confirmation but fluttershy calls him a he not she.
Man cold food that sucks having cold food sucks no one likes cold food