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Vinyl_Wubs


There are a lot of things this show has taught me. When I started watching, I never expected it to affect me as much as it has. But now that I'm here, I don't know what I'd do without you all!

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I could see people mistaking them for a gay couple, not that that's bad but it's just there, anyways pretty good story, keep it up. :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Patric12345 deleted Dec 1st, 2013

This is actually pretty cool. How do you guys roleplay while writing a chapter together? Skype?

The more I reread this, the more I wish these guys were real, and we were friends.

For all of you waiting here's a little snippet from a future chapter. Changing up the morals of J Dog a little here.


J lunged and kissed her passionately right then and there.

Octavia’s mind did a double take and she couldn’t comprehend what was going on. The two mares said they saw him flirting and hitting on another mare… now… everything… everything was wrong…

J broke away, “Then… let that be a goodbye kiss… I’m sorry I hurt you… I’m sorry I’m not… No… I’m not good for you… you deserve someone better. I hope you find that one… I’ll feel happy again when you do… Goodbye Octavia…” J said. He was beginning to cry himself. Inside it felt like he was dying. Every fiber of his being screamed for him to recant his words and get down on both knees and plead for her to take him back. He got up slowly and prepared to walk out.

3575393 Yeah what Patric said. Wait... Am I real? ARE YOU REAL? WHO AM I! :flutterrage:

Holy damn man. Great job!

For a little bit to cut down on words in each chapter I'll do mine in parts if it grows to be over 3000 words. Save you all a bit of reading and it gives Vinyl time to write his chapters. I have more time in my day to write.

3583503 While I usually write at night. Sounds good!

For those that like our work, please feel free to join our group "The Twin Packs." to talk, post stories of your own, and hang out with the community.

The next few chapters follow a small sub arc. Bringing a little spice to it with this one. If you hated the cliff hangers in A dash or recklessness then you'll hate me to no end!

Also. Prepare for an ass load of musical references. And possibly a new member or two... or three. :raritywink:

I foresee j killing some pony in the future.

WTF have i just read :pinkiecrazy:

need to see how this is going to end :rainbowderp:

3621328 Oh... Just wait. It's going to be fun.

3621362>>3621441 No, I'm being serious. It's that inconsistent, I have actually lost track of what the fuck is happening.

3621447 That's sort of the point. We didn't know where it was going when we wrote this... It's sort of to further J's personality and to stir some shit up. It's entirely strange... Just wait a for the next chapter. It will make even less sense as to why we wrote this. And it's just for some pointless sex.

And it was supposed to start differently... BUT... Our minds combined and this came out.

3621462
Pointless sex is great but still some direction
J just adopted scoot
Star in on some strange rape rampage
shit is just all over the place

3621474 I agree with that. But... this is sort of just the byproduct of the next group of chapters. I wanted to get all of this out of the way. Just stick with us for now. It'll be over after the next chapter. And this for me is a WTF is going on moment. Vinyl just said go along with it. And I did. Although it was really funny writing this chapter. So many lolz where had.

3621483
still wait to find what star did with them. can't just ne "he did ___" we need an answer on what happened down there

3621636 It's coming. Expect the conclusion to it this weekend. If it doesn't get explained complain to Vinyl I don't even know what he was thinking when he was doing that.

3622252
Of course you are... other wise "hell we don't have a driver near the wheel"

Can't wait to know what happened down there

*clicks publish*
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May god help us all.

If you thought chapter 15 was a WTF moment. Wait until Sixteen!
:pinkiecrazy:

*wipes sweat off forehead*

Done!

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:rainbowderp: DAME11111!!!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp:

i really can't say much more then that... dame... fine clop work, extreme harsh brutal... soooo good :pinkiehappy:

your going in my fav writer list (will contact you about it later, there is a meaning to it)

BRB... need to do "stuff" (LOL)...

3631181>>3631206
his right you know
you'll go first for writing this shit
me next for reading and liking it

3631254 Well we're back to normal. Now. Don't expect this again in the near future.

For something even scarier listen to this while reading Chapter 16

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There is no "back" after this one

3631306 No. There is. It's just normal for Twilight and Dash. The rest of us know.

This is what I am for what I am planning on doing later. God save me. None shall be unhate filled for this day of reckoning is upon me.

And on a last note

One Dick to rule them all
One Dick to bring them together
And in the darkness grind them.

3632522 A tad inaccurate, considering there were two dicks... two NATURAL dicks, rather.

The only way to describe the scene with AJ is to use the immortal words of the great and wise Tobuscus.

Hot-hot-hot hot-hot-hot-hot-hot!

3632470
so true...

3632522
LOL, true
even that there are 2 of them, still nice one
we need MLP X LOTR

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don't play the inocent one, not after what you've wrote before

will read it once i'm home, won't one NSFW storys where people can read them

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