Interesting story, certainly enjoyable and definitely saddening in the end. Personally a favourite now, great use of language and perfect scene created. 10/10

3526388 i agree on the memory part. that felt like it shouldn't have been there

Interesting >:D I like memory erasing in my own opinion and that regret at the end. beautiful ^^ 10/10 >=D Next chapteh!

Who's Flora?

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You might want to make a second pass through the first chapter; Flora was the name Rarity imprinted on Blueblood as she overwrote his mind.

He should’ve used the alicorn amulets powers to restructure her face