Set in the tumblr universe Fall of Equestria, this story follows Dreamy Gaze, a young colt learning to master his magical potential.
You have a good story in the making here and a steady update pace along with few grammatical errors. Keep it up
3520459 I try to fix those with the spell check when I post it. If it's not got a red line under it, though, I usually miss it as a typo.
3521079 It's usually just extremely small things such as a missed comma or slightly run-on sentence. Nowhere near as bad as some popular fics ironically.
You have a good story in the making here and a steady update pace along with few grammatical errors. Keep it up
3520459 I try to fix those with the spell check when I post it. If it's not got a red line under it, though, I usually miss it as a typo.
3521079 It's usually just extremely small things such as a missed comma or slightly run-on sentence. Nowhere near as bad as some popular fics ironically.