Personally, I'm not surprised that your prologue is 2,127 words long. Seems small for a prologue to me, actually, given that mine is 3,907.
Been looking forward to this for a while. Finally, the tables have turned and the roles have changed. We get to see Kris in the driver's seat, to use a metaphor.
It is a good start for the story, though I keep getting this feeling that Allegro is a tad bit cynical, though it seems she has been burned a few times so that is understandable. I felt the pace is good so far, but other than the cynical feeling I was also feeling a hint of...well its kind of hard to say but it was not something good. I look forward to seeing where you take this story
Personally, I'm not surprised that your prologue is 2,127 words long. Seems small for a prologue to me, actually, given that mine is 3,907.
Been looking forward to this for a while. Finally, the tables have turned and the roles have changed. We get to see Kris in the driver's seat, to use a metaphor.
See you around!
~InfiniteZero
NEED MOAR! please?
Well well, this looks promising. A damn good start for your first, looking forward to more.
It is a good start for the story, though I keep getting this feeling that Allegro is a tad bit cynical, though it seems she has been burned a few times so that is understandable.
I felt the pace is good so far, but other than the cynical feeling I was also feeling a hint of...well its kind of hard to say but it was not something good. I look forward to seeing where you take this story
I have a story with this title too
That's the main reason I clicked it
I am still pleased with this.