...THAT LINE.... GOOD TIDINGS ARE COMING.

5980814 Tell me what you think about it when you're done.

Because of a few problems I had with the story, which I've detailed here, I'm rejecting this from submissions.

6056612 Thanks for the review. It's great to know some honest opinions from time to time.

6118276 It's a Marvel / DC world where both humans and ponies have coexisted since the beginning of time. Unlike most comic book heroes, I chose to focus on their parents or lesser known Marvel / DC heroes and build them into my own original adaptation.

6118276 Oh, btw, in the Renegadeverse, Equestria I would say is a large land mass in the middle of the Pacific Ocean smack in between Asia and the Americas. The land is divided between the various races with Canterlot as the middle kingdom. That being said, not all of Equestria are willful parts of the Equestrian Union. Some of them rule independently and aren't too fond of the ponies. I'll leave those stories to be covered in the future seasons.

Grimdark, grimdark and more grimdark. Hell yes! Your writing style is superb. The characterization, the world building... I cannot wait to delve deeper into this universe you've created.

6448288 Glad you enjoy it Though updates might be a little slow. Episodes are long and takes a fair amount of time to iron out. But don't worry, I haven't given up on this yet.

Nice story so far hope to see the next chapter soon

Kudos on the Amazing Spiderman and Finding Nemo references.

Just a tip, I noticed that you tend to have your characters use the same type of attack multiple times. Obviously, their fighting styles are your invention, but I felt that Parker's use of the roundhouse kick was a bit repetitive.

6861847 Not sure I did include a Finding Nemo reference Might have to tell me where. Episode 3 is my experiment with fight scenes and I hope to improve the way I write fights in the episodes to come. And trust me, there'll be A LOT of fight scenes.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1x9W70LJKVw

I'm not wrong...

6877063 Oh, I recall now!

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It’s like you got fifth sense or something.

Five? FIVE!?