Pinkie Pie has the best life ever! She's got all her friends with her, and everypony smiles all the time! Nothing could possibly ever be wrong... Until the day Pinkie realizes EVERYTHING is wrong.
3350800 Just a few notes. I appreciate the comment. However, I also feel the need to clear a few things up Spike most likely stayed home, asleep. The party takes place at night (Pretty sure at least - sometimes my own writing goes beyond even my knowledge ), and since he's a baby dragon, he needs his rest. I've already had a comment on AJ's accent, and I know I have a few problems with it ^^;; I attempted an accent, and am personally happy with the results. Otherwise, I thank you for the comment, and will try and work on it ^^;; And the comment about Pinkie's consideration is answered above by Spike staying home to get some rest. (Or else Twilight was just a jerk and didn't tell him about the party like Pinkie expected )
3352198 The scene in which the party takes place is just in Pinkie's head, but for the record, Spike has only ever needed sleep in one episode: Owl's Well that Ends Well. And it was only for plot convenience. In Winter Wrap-Up, he even stayed awake and active longer than twenty-four hours.
And now I'm starting to like the story. I was predicting and hoping for this twist, and it feels good.
i like it
Ho. Ly. Frick. My notifications box exploded with comments xD
3350800 Just a few notes. I appreciate the comment. However, I also feel the need to clear a few things up
Spike most likely stayed home, asleep. The party takes place at night (Pretty sure at least - sometimes my own writing goes beyond even my knowledge ), and since he's a baby dragon, he needs his rest.
I've already had a comment on AJ's accent, and I know I have a few problems with it ^^;; I attempted an accent, and am personally happy with the results. Otherwise, I thank you for the comment, and will try and work on it ^^;;
And the comment about Pinkie's consideration is answered above by Spike staying home to get some rest. (Or else Twilight was just a jerk and didn't tell him about the party like Pinkie expected )
3350930 The world may never know! Except it will, cause I'm writing more
3352198 The scene in which the party takes place is just in Pinkie's head, but for the record, Spike has only ever needed sleep in one episode: Owl's Well that Ends Well. And it was only for plot convenience. In Winter Wrap-Up, he even stayed awake and active longer than twenty-four hours.
3362666 And in this fic, Spike is asleep for plot convenience as well.
3364446 Touché, my friend.
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayy cant wait for chapter 5!!!