Pinkie Pie has the best life ever! She's got all her friends with her, and everypony smiles all the time! Nothing could possibly ever be wrong... Until the day Pinkie realizes EVERYTHING is wrong.
Judging by the tags, this is a little bit out of my comfort zone, but you made a case for it anyway! The grammar is just about spot-on, and the characters are doing a good enough job of staying in-character. I want to offer some constructive criticism here, but nothing's really coming to mind. As far as the prologue goes, a very nice job.
OMG I EXPLODED WHEN I SAW MY NOTIFICATIONS. Been so worried I would get a negative response to this! x3 Seriously happy that you all enjoy it so much already, and this is just the prologue! Thanks guys!!
this is like, the best fanfic ever!!! thats saying alot because i read rainbow factory! -now dashie be like "Who told you?!" then "TELL NOPONY!!!"- lol
Judging by the tags, this is a little bit out of my comfort zone, but you made a case for it anyway! The grammar is just about spot-on, and the characters are doing a good enough job of staying in-character. I want to offer some constructive criticism here, but nothing's really coming to mind. As far as the prologue goes, a very nice job.
Im on for this ride into a darker adventure then usual
OMG I EXPLODED WHEN I SAW MY NOTIFICATIONS. Been so worried I would get a negative response to this! x3 Seriously happy that you all enjoy it so much already, and this is just the prologue! Thanks guys!!
That was creepy. I think Pinkamena just came a-knocking.
i was actually able to read pinkie pie saying about tanks bday!!!
this is like, the best fanfic ever!!! thats saying alot because i read rainbow factory! -now dashie be like "Who told you?!" then
"TELL NOPONY!!!"- lol