Figures Sunset's house would be like that.

Thanks for using my idea, I envisioned it a little longer but this is cool too, good job :)

5887602 If I make it into its own story, it'll be multi-chapter, and the focus will be on more than just that night. It'll be on the group and their families adjusting to the Humane Six's new lifestyle.

5887574 Well, even if Sunset brought some bits over from Equestria, she probably wouldn't have enough of the human currency after exchanging for anything bigger while having enough money to support herself long-time. Plus, at the time she bought it, she was estranged from Princess Celestia.

5887625 I ment being a clothes free house.

5887615 Cool

5887653 Oh, yeah. Well, I imagine it as her pony side shining through.

I kinda like it, but it's a bit too fast paced. it's more like the kind of fic which goes:
Someone says something
Something happens suddenly for no reason
Next scene
Repeat
the main idea is pretty good, but it just went Way over my head, sorry

5899936 Thank you for your critique. I've noticed that's a problem with my stories, but I haven't been able to correct it.

Question: Would you guys mind if I branched into other franchises as well as other MLP universes?

Yeah, what Desettortise said.
Though third chapter was much better. Quite good actually.

One nitpick in 2nd

Down the street a ways.

I dislike a ways so much
;)